Hot Hot Heat

[mico_blue]

Title: Hot Hot Heat

Comments

[a__]

Nicely done.

You have storytelling talent, get a beta though, you'll be thrilled with the results and it will make it that much better for your readers.

[mico_blue]

ty for reading....yes i hope some poor eejit will volunteer to be my beta!

[annebd]

I'll be back with a comment just as soon as I take a cold shower. Hot heat, indeed!

[mico_blue]

lol...thank you. enjoy your shower!

[monetfun]

That was amazing. I loved the concept of the heat and then ending up at Andy's place which leads to hot sex. I can't wait to read more from you.

[mico_blue]

thanks a million! glad you enjoyed it :)

[katsforever]

that was amazing.
I love how you were able to convey the sheer misery of the heat...the sweat dripping into Andy's boots, Miranda's shirt sticking to her back...really great imagery.
You're a great writer. I enjoyed this story a lot.

thanks for posting.

[mico_blue]

when i was in college i went backpacking for 4 months around south america. my flight over stopped in NYC so, never having been there, i decided to take a couple of days to mooch around a bit. the heat was incredible and i was wearing a new pair of flip flops which cut my feet to ribbons....i think i may have channeled a bit of that misery when i stuck Andy in those boots during a heat wave!

[xavacid]

That was hot! I'm wide awake now.

[mico_blue]

lol!

thank you ;)