Comments | mickey_dear: Fic: The Child is Gone

mickey_dear

Fic: The Child is Gone

Jun 12, 2009 23:12

Title: The Child is Gone
Fandom: Heroes
Characters: Claire Bennet, Peter Petrelli (+mentions of ensemble)
Pairing(s): Hints of Claire/Peter
Rating: PG13 (mentions of death and torture)
Word Count: 437
Summary: She’s seen horrors people others cannot even imagine. And she’s lived through it all, she has no choice but to. However, eternal life comes ( Read more... )

category: contest entry, category: oneshot, category: contest, character: peter petrelli, character: claire bennet, category: prompt, fic: the child is gone

Comments 13

commen_sense June 13 2009, 08:14:25 UTC

amazing. as always :) the last line is epic ^_^

mickey_dear June 13 2009, 15:03:28 UTC

Thank you so much!

Epic= WOO HOOO!!!!!

red_hayate June 13 2009, 14:23:23 UTC

AHH YOUR SKILLS.
THEY ARE AMAZING.

This is a great example of some of your more poetic fic -- you have a nice way of using imagery and language and for such a short fic there is so much emotion...
*applauds you*
Well done and good luck in the contest~~ :P

PS: Love the banner :D

mickey_dear June 13 2009, 15:07:29 UTC

I fixed formatting boo boos!!!!
Go me!

-dies of joy-
-glomps-
-flails-

Thank you so much. I always find short fics harder because you have to make them pop in very little words. I've read some that make everything too condensed, it's just a pile of words trying to elicit emotions.
So that you very much for saying I'm not one of those
-dies- of joy-
I think I'm over emotional today, but that's okay!
XDDDD

Thank you, Ill need it, have you READ the other entries!!!!

PS: It was just a last minute thing so thank you very much.

pcdarkrose June 13 2009, 16:35:58 UTC

Gorgeous! Wonderfully written :)

mickey_dear June 13 2009, 17:08:03 UTC

Thank you so much!

bellonablack June 13 2009, 19:21:36 UTC

Oh my this is beautiful.

Painful.

Love it so.

mickey_dear June 14 2009, 00:53:37 UTC

That's a ridiculous compliment.
Wow.

I hardly know what to say.

Painful was what I was going for, so thank you very much.

Just wow!

bellonablack June 14 2009, 01:28:44 UTC

Ridiculously true. XD Love your stuff.

*hugs*

mickey_dear June 15 2009, 22:49:50 UTC

And I adore your comments!

-squishes!-

wuhdemah June 14 2009, 03:47:43 UTC

Oh my lordy, your words, they are mesmerizing. Wonderful, wonderful job. <3 This was poignant in all its meanings. I loved it.

mickey_dear June 15 2009, 22:53:02 UTC

Thank you so much!!! That's probably one of the nicest things anyone had ever about my writing. Just wow!

Yes, because with eternal life come death to all that matters and loss of innocence. Glad someone else got it!

wuhdemah June 22 2009, 02:35:09 UTC

This response is somewhat delayed, but you're very welcome! <3