Fic: Walking through golden ages

[michelsita]

Title: Walking through golden ages
Rating:  PG-13
Pairings: Peter/Claire
Word Count: 343.
A/N: Written for the "Speed" challenge at

Comments

[jetsabul]

this made my night! Love it!

[michelsita]

Really Ari? *bats eyelashes*

Thank you, thank you!

Did you notice any errors?

[jetsabul]

Yes it did :D
Nope, didn't notice any :D

[fallenmagic]

I loved this! I was toying with this kind of idea for the theme but you did it so much better than my ideas lol

The last sentence is just brilliant :D

[michelsita]

Thank you! :D

I wasn't sure it was a good idea for the prompt, but usually my drabbles have life of their owns *lol*

I haven't read the other drabbles for the challenge, I'll do that before I vote.

It's my favourite line too, actually yesterday all I had was the 1st paragraph and that last line. I knew how to start and how to end.

[joanna_484]

Aw, this is bittersweet in its loveliness! I like the idea of Peter just standing by, not participating in everything that occurs around him for centuries, his only thoughts on Claire and spending eternity with her...

[michelsita]

Jo!
Isn't Peter better when he's all tortured with his hero complex? *sigh*
At least he got his reward in the end.
Thanks for reading *hug*

[summer_cities]

omg, i love it. time moves in slow mo as they find each other again. i did a piece like this sort of from claires pov, but they don't connect at the end. this is great.

[michelsita]

Thank you!
Times moves extremely fast or slow when you're not living it properly.
Inmortality it's an amazing subject to write when it comes to this couple.
Thanks again ;)

[wuhdemah]

I told you I loved it, and you said if I felt inclined to comment - so here I am. :D

I just loved the idea of this; the fact that time moves so fast for Peter that he doesn't even notice many things, and yet when he sees Claire every moment is so precious it's all he can do to slow down and memorize it.

So yes, I loved it. <3 Great, great little ficlet.

[michelsita]

Thank you, I appreciate a lot you read it and also took time to comment ;)

People say time flies when you're having fun but I'm sure there're moments in slow motion, the ones so important you can describe all the details. Seeing the love of your life after centuries must be one of them.