fic: too young

[michelsita]

Title: Too young
Characters: Mohinder, Claire and Peter, mentions of others.
Word Count:  554
Rating: PG-13
Summary: AU after S1, Peter exploded in the sky, Nathan died and everybody else joined a crusade against The Company.
Spoilers: S1.
A/N: Unbetaed and needs a lot of polishing.

They have walked a long way, she was a living person instead of a scaring

Comments

[joanna_484]

Oh, very angsty, Michelle! It's sad to think that Claire has buried her own family and that Peter is all the family she has left in the world, and vice versa. But I love the images of she and Peter being the centres of each other's universes. Lovely little future fic :)

[michelsita]

*yay* A comment! *hugs Jo tight*

I think I like angst the most, in special when it comes to Paire, with their forbidden love vibe it suits them.

Peter looks at her thinking the sun comes out just in her request. It’s obvious to all of them that she thinks the world rotates because of him, that’s who they are.
I think that's my favourite sentence about them here, shows so much devotion, I imagine perfectly how they stare at each other *sigh*

Thanks for all your kind words my friend! :D

[stolen_kisses87]

This was really good, especially the ending. I love that it's got some Mohinder thrown in there as well. Nice job!

[michelsita]

Wow! :D
Thank you, for reading and also commenting, makes me smile.
I like the ending the most too, I usually start from there when I write.