Someone to Save You, ch. 9

Jan 21, 2009 19:38

Chapter Nine

The helo landed a couple of miles from the river. Victor quickly cut the engine as the others climbed out. Once the rotors stopped spinning, he followed, jogging to catch up with them - well Oliver and AC anyway. Bart, of course, had taken off to do a perimeter search. The four members of the Justice League met at the rendezvous point ( Read more... )

smallville, chloe/oliver, fic

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gen717 January 22 2009, 02:14:07 UTC
Wonderful update! You've made my night! :)

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michellemtsu January 22 2009, 02:56:42 UTC
Mission accomplished then! :D Glad you liked it!

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svgurl January 22 2009, 02:35:04 UTC
Fantastic update! I was so excited to see a new chapter! Wow, this chapter was intense.

Oh, Chloe used her powers on Ollie. I knew she would but I felt so sad for both of them when he woke up to find her dead. Especially since she just realized she was in love with him. Poor Chlollie.

I really liked the conversation between Ollie and Clark. That was nice. Clark knowing that he had feelings for her was hilarious.

“You really care about her, don’t you?” he asked quietly.

Oliver dropped his gaze back to Chloe’s face. “Yeah, I do.”

Clark gave him a soft smile. “I suspected as much.”

Oliver looked over at him in surprise. “You’re not as cool a customer as you think, Oliver. It was written all over your face at the charity ball.”

I like Clark getting to call someone else obvious, for a change. And yay for Clark going to comfort Lois. That makes me happy.

I hope Chloe wakes up soon.

Wonderful job!

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michellemtsu January 22 2009, 02:55:35 UTC
Thanks! Glad you like it! Don't worry nothing will keep Chloe down for long! :D

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delylah January 22 2009, 07:00:23 UTC
Wonderful chapter! I'm glad you didn't have Clark jumping down Oliver's throat. Can't wait to see the next chapter, now that they've both realized how deep their feelings run for each other. :)

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michellemtsu January 22 2009, 12:54:08 UTC
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I think that Clark understood how he'd feel if the situation were reversed, so he went for understanding rather than being pissed off. Plus Chloe's a big girl and can make her own decisions.

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campbti January 22 2009, 20:42:20 UTC
excellent update. I am very much enjoying this story.

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michellemtsu January 23 2009, 00:02:23 UTC
Thanks! I'm so glad you like it!

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lilacs_roses September 13 2009, 00:56:01 UTC
I'd really like to see some more of this story :)

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