Someone to Save You, ch. 7

[michellemtsu]

 

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That was a fabulous chapter ... packed with emotion. I could totally feel Oliver's pain.

Loved the flashback. Yay for Oliver kissing Chloe! That's definitely a step in the right direction.

But the poor guy ... what an awful way to find out that his parents were murdered, not in an accident. I was really depressed they never addressed that on the show. Maybe next season?

Chloe handled him very well ... I'm glad he had her to be at his side. And the ending of the chapter ... Oliver reminded me of a little boy there.

Wonderful job! I can't wait to see what will happen next.

[michellemtsu]

Thanks! I really want them to address the whole Veritas murders too. Maybe that's one of Ollie's plot points this year.

Chloe and Ollie are definitely moving in the right direction.They'll be getting more nudges, that's for sure!

[sarcastic_fina]

Aww! I loved all of this! I was leaning in and totally involved in every word. When Ollie got all emotional over his parents, I got pretty teary-eyed. And the ending, again Awww! They're so sweet together! Great work. I'm so glad you updated! :)

[michellemtsu]

They are pretty great together! I'm so glad you liked this! :)

[smallville143]

the next chap should be lets get it on ;)love it

[michellemtsu]

LOL! Trust me, that's coming. I promise. There are a couple things that have to happen first though. Glad you liked it!

[gen717]

So glad to see an update! I've been hoping for one, but I know how real life has to interfere with writing. Hope to see more soon. :)

[michellemtsu]

I'm working on the next one!

[michellemtsu]

I'm glad you liked it! :)