Someone to Save You, ch. 6

[michellemtsu]

Chapter Six

Chloe was trying not to panic. As calmly as she could, she gathered up the laptop and tucked it under her arm. She looked at Oliver, a question in her worried eyes. He held up a hand and switched on his comm.

“How much time?” he asked Victor.

“Elevator’s shut down, so they have to come up the stairs. Maybe two minutes? Three at the

Comments

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I was so excited when I saw that this story had been updated. It's really wonderful and this chapter was great too.

Ollie and Chloe's escape was awesome. Chloe and Clark's conversation was my favorite part. I'm glad that he accepted that he can't control her.

Your characters are very mature and even the Chloe-Jimmy split was tasteful. It's good that they parted on nice terms.

I can't wait to see where you go next.

Fantastic job!

[michellemtsu]

Thanks! I really loved the Chloe/Clark convo too. Clark's got to realize that he's got more important things to deal with (like saving the world!), than protecting people who can handle things on their own. Plus it's not like Chloe is hero-less! ;)

[leonhart_17]

This chapter was great! I love the interactions between all of them! I think it's cute that Clark is determined to protect Chloe but I'm glad he's trusting her to take care of herself...and let Oliver take care of her :)

[michellemtsu]

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!