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In The Morning, I'll Wish I'd Kept My Clothes On (Liz/Nancy/Avery)

Mar 23, 2011 00:52

Title: In The Morning, I'll Wish I'd Kept My Clothes On
For: Green Beer & Kisses: The [Totally Not] Annual femslash_today Porn Battle
Prompt: 30 Rock, Liz/Nancy/Avery, Jack
Spoilers: "I Do Do," but AU
Word Count: 1,455
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Liz is trying to rationalize this as something *good.*

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue!

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liz/avery/nancy, avery/nancy, liz/nancy, liz/avery, 30 rock

Comments 19

damelola March 24 2011, 15:56:07 UTC

Ah, this is hilarious and wonderful and Avery as sex director is the most correct thing in the universe!

michellek March 25 2011, 00:04:36 UTC

Thank you kindly! I do think the role would fit her. :)

torak303 March 29 2011, 00:24:20 UTC

30 Rock porn is so awesome because when written this well it manages to be both funny and hot. Love this

michellek March 29 2011, 04:05:27 UTC

Thank you! :D

lz1982 March 29 2011, 18:21:40 UTC

Hee, I really liked this, and the idea of Avery being the director makes perfect sense. And Jack definitely deserved to get dumped by both women.

"--the he's just doing it as a means to an end.

I know this was an interrupted thought, but it still reads oddly--is "the" supposed to be something else?

michellek March 30 2011, 00:13:42 UTC

Yep, 'the' should be a 'that.' It has now been fixed. :)

I think I must still feel hostile about the love triangle, since when I saw this prompt I thought, "Yeah, they all should do it. Take that, Jack, you jag!" I'm glad you enjoyed this; I always feel nervous about writing Avery and including Liz in crazy sex, so suffice to say I was extra nervous about posting this one.

(Somewhat related: Do you think Jack and Avery will break up down the line?)

lz1982 March 30 2011, 20:04:12 UTC

Hmm...I really don't know. It kind of seems like they've hinted at that, with the "being too alike isn't a good thing" stuff. And I just don't see true love coming from either of them. It all feels pragmatic and common-sense, which has its place, but is uninspiring to watch. Plus, the pairing was set up in such a distasteful way that it's hard to see it working out.

michellek March 31 2011, 03:01:58 UTC

At the beginning of the season I thought they were taking the Jack/Avery soulmates 4 eva thing seriously and I assumed Liz would end up alone/Jack would be married, but I do now have the feeling that they're not going to stay together and that Elizabeth Banks will be more gone from the series (again, like her role on Scrubs, what is that about). Which kind of makes Jack/Avery seem pointless to me, but I guess it would never have been super meaningful whatever happened.

shesgottaread March 30 2011, 01:21:08 UTC

I got here from http://www.uberetc.com and boy am I glad I followed the link.

You've got Liz's inner-talk down pat. Really great!

I have to admit not being familiar w/Avery or Nancy having not watched the show in a while, but their commentary on Jack also felt spot-on.

Thanks for writing!
--sgr

michellek March 31 2011, 03:03:45 UTC

Thank you muchly! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)