30 Rock, Jack/Liz, Random One, Prompt #15. Insidious

[michellek]

Title: Bitter(Not)Sweet
Author: michellek
Challenge: drabble123
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairings: Jack/Liz, Jack/Avery
Table: Random One
Prompt: #15. Insidious
Rating: PG
Word Count: 300
Summary: Liz hates to admit this... Spoilers for 'I Do Do.'

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue.

Comments

[omnomnom17]

Aw, this is so heartbreaking! You do have to feel for Liz- it annoys me that Jack's (possibly) going to end up having a family even after being such a douche for so long. Not fair!

Really, this was beautifully written- poor, poor Liz...

Jack was showing off photos of his one-month-old son -- to everyone, even *Lutz*, which surprised Liz -- Jenna burst into a passionate rendition of 'Time After Time.'
Okay, this made me laugh so damn hard- you've captured Jack's Lutz-hate and Jenna's love of randomly bursting into song brilliantly.

[michellek]

That is one of the things that really gets to me... seriously, I liked Jack/Avery in the beginning, before he started stringing two women along and I just wanted him to get kicked to the curb by both ladies, and I think I'd feel less upset about him having kids before Liz if he was in a real, committed relationship with Avery as opposed to being a waffling d-bag. I MEAN, HE HAD SEX WITH ANOTHER WOMAN ON THE SAME DAY AVERY TOLD HIM SHE WAS PREGNANT, HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO FEEL GOOD ABOUT THIS. Meanwhile, Tina's talking about Liz is going to alone forever, what the hell is this nonsense.

But enough about me getting bummed out.

Thank you! And I'm glad to make you laugh; I liked slipping that little burst of humor into this slice of angst.

[ilovelemon]

Omg...this was awesome...Please don't ever stop writing Jack/Liz because you are AMAZING at it =D
I'd rather live in the world of Jack/Liz fanfic than face reality :P

[michellek]

I will write fic and face reality, I guess.