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michellek

30 Rock, General Series. #090. It

Aug 05, 2007 19:32

Title: Uncovered
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Prompt: drabbles100 #090. It
Word Count: 468
Rating: PG
Author's Notes: Table is here.
Summary: "We did it." An all-dialogue morning after.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue.

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drabbles100 (claim #2), jack/liz, 30 rock

Comments 25

mouseydork August 6 2007, 03:03:36 UTC

Like everyone else said, your Liz is spot on. And I love the dialogue heavy stuff. Yours says everything that is needed even without a narrative. Awesome.

michellek August 7 2007, 06:17:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.

caz963 August 6 2007, 09:29:59 UTC

I think I've become addicted to your 30 Rock fic!

As everyone else has said, Liz is spot on. Thanks for posting.

michellek August 7 2007, 06:17:39 UTC

I'm glad. :) And thank you for reading and feedbacking.

silent__dreamer August 6 2007, 13:55:32 UTC

"You're right, I shouldn't. This is my apartment."

lol great job as usual and I agree Liz Lemon is right on in this one.

michellek August 7 2007, 06:18:07 UTC

Thank you!

csi_miamie126 August 9 2007, 06:19:51 UTC

Dude, this "all-dialogue" drabble ROCKS. You can imagine them saying that! (That's the all-out essence of the fic. If the characters are IN character, you scored.)

Keep it up!

michellek August 13 2007, 04:45:53 UTC

Thank you!

I shall try. :)

fatema August 12 2007, 06:59:26 UTC

Excellent characterization. I heard their voice throughout. :)

michellek August 13 2007, 04:46:23 UTC

Yay, I'm glad. :)