"GRINCH" - Siempre me quedara

[michellejparker]

Title: "GRINCH" (additional chapter)
Words: too much for lj to handle
Characters: Fernando Torres, Daniel Agger
Summary: AU
Disclaimer: Never happened

This chapter is an additional thing. Came out rather unexpectedly, but all thanks go to

Comments

[niezapominajk]

I love you! This is so, so great! I read it this morning and I had so many things to write then, but when I looked at the clock after I finished I was running very late. On monday I'm starting my classes a lot later than normally but at this particular day I promised my grandma I'll visit her before and you post! I don't remember half of the things I wanted to write then, but I had such a nice feelings throughout the day :) But back to the point. Now I understand Fernando much more why he fell for Daniel. When a constant ass suddenly acts so differently around you, you just have to know why, it pulls you to them. And Danny here ♥ well, at least up to the morning... definitely understand Nando more. But it's just realy, really, really great to read Siempre me quedara again. I can't wait for the final part, but backstories are much welcome ^^ (I still have a feeling I missed something I wanted to write...)

[michellejparker]

Yay, I'm so happy that you liked this part. Well, obviously I'm always happy when someone enjoys what I write, but you know, I think you're the type of reader, who have been with me from the whole beginning, through the good & the bad (more bad, than good) and you know the story, the whole story, you've seen me doing progress or taking step backwards, so when you say you enjoy some piece that I wrote, I'm just a happy person. :)

This, exactly this what you just said! Now I understand Fernando much more why he fell for Daniel - that was the whole point of this back-story, I guess. I've rushed through their whole falling-in-love-with-each-other-thing in the first chapter I think, I wrote it only to give some sense of how things looked between them, but I never went into that. That's what the other person also pointed out to me. And that's why I also decided to focus on writing it

[allwaswellharry]

Oh my god, im so glad you're back!!! I'm reading it now!

[michellejparker]

Can't wait to know what you think! Enjoy! :)

[allwaswellharry]

Oh god, oh god im a wreck right now. Im crying so much omg. It was beautiful! I understand Fer now, i mean, i've been in this kind of situation before and this made me remember it. Sigh. Dan was so ador dancing and singing and the 'what if we only kiss' part was really nice. The ending killed me tho, Fer feeling so- sad? dissappointed?, i think he tried to 'get used to' daniel acting like that but he cant and that broke my heart really :((((

I cant wait to read more from you, you're amazing! I'm looking forward for the last chaps of Siempre me quedará :)

[michellejparker]

Please, don't cry! Damn, it was supposed to be a happy one, not a sad one, haha, I guess, my love for drama comes out even when I don't plan it

[fernedakki]

Wow, it's out! :D Wait a sec, let me finish it and i'll be back with proper comment.

[michellejparker]

Aaaaaaand I'm waiting! I'm hundred percent sure you're busy or something like that, but I start to think you thought it was tragically bad and you just don't know how to say it here LOL though I hope maybe it's not true. :D

[fernedakki]

Of course not! And I know you're waiting so I just wanted to torture you a bit, that's how nice I am. *evil smirks* But really I just finished it now so I'll start raving:

That was cute. Contrary to others' opinions which I glimpsed past, I don't think it's sad. They seemed to have quite a good time together and Daniel seemed truly enjoy it though I had no idea he had that idiotically funny side, that's a surprise, and so cute of him. I kinda understand both Fernando's and Daniel's feelings on the last scene; well, Daniel was concentrating on his work after all, for me that's not a big deal if someone pays less attention to me because his mind is on something serious. Fernando should know better than that and don't make a fuss over it, I think it's boys' natural habit. Or maybe because I know that finally they'll have a happy ending (won't they?) so I don't feel that much sad.

What is really forlorn is that their relationship happened solely in Daniel's room, which make the whole thing feel like an affair rather than real relationship,