Chapter 9 - Siempre me quedara

Jul 25, 2013 03:54

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siempre me quedara

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niezapominajk July 25 2013, 14:52:40 UTC
Aaaaaa!
I love you ♥ I love you, I love you, I love you! *calming down* So yeah. Oh! I'm still so excited for an update. OK. Mats! I always imagined Captain as a, I don't know, a tall, muscular but lanky (is this even possible?) person with a little bit of hair. Kind of haggard version of Prince William, yeah something like that :P But Mats! He's perfect! I feel like everything clicked in all the right places. I can perfectly see him as a junkie (does this mean I compared William to a junkie?...), even when he didn't cross my mind when I made my ideas. And he's hot. I even had a plan of stalking him, since I often visit my family who lives 10 kilometers away from Dortmund, but sadly no one wanted to be my partner in crime and it didn't work out ;( ;)) Captain's shaping as a great chracter. I dare to say you have some kind of weird attraction of putting your characters into hospitals ;) But I extremly enjoy this story and this chapter fits just well and gives hunger for more.
Loads of inspirations ;*

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michellejparker July 25 2013, 16:40:53 UTC
First of all, I love you too. ♥ When I post the chapter, you're almost every time, the first person to comment. And you always do a great job of cheering me up, with your reviews. This time, I was kind of nervous, because here comes the chapter, where I reveal Captain's identity, and what if it ruins a story for someone? What if Hummels, is definitely hell-no for what other's have imagined? But on the other hand, when having almost an inifitive possibility of choices, because I could go for any player I wanted to, I chose him. Because I think, he's perfect. With his look mostly. Handsome, but not in a typical, pretty way. Masculine, but not bulky. And a great fit for a rich, spoiled junkie. He was supposed to be a background character, two chapters top, but suddenly, he's one of the most important persona's in this story. And, finally, I have to agree, my "weird attraction of putting my characters into hospitals" IS OFFICIAL NOW. AND I'M TOTALLY ASHAMED TO ADMIT TO IT. Hahahaha, forgive me, you and everyone else's, who's tired of ( ... )

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jossboss July 28 2013, 23:24:29 UTC
AHHHH NEW CHAPTER :)
I'm sad there's no fernando in here because I want him to feel shitty for being such a dick after all that Daniel did to help him..... Since he did do a lot and he's clearlyyy stressed out so it's not completely unreasonable for him to snap after all that's happened.. but anyway onto this chapter
i'm sooooo glad we found out who the mysterious "Captain" was! I would never have guessed lol
poor Daniel :( he's so injured it makes me feel so bad to see him like this.. Now to Sergio I wouldn't mind cause I really dislike him LOL
CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT UPDATEEE!!!!!
I hope we have more Nando

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michellejparker July 29 2013, 12:22:38 UTC
I know about Fernando, I know. It's like he's suddenly out of the story, because I guess it's been already 2 or 3 chapters without him, hahahah. But who cares, the bastard didn't deserve it. No, but seriously, you're actually the first person thinking this way about Nando. That he's a dick after all that Daniel did to help him and stick with him through the bad times. If he would stay with Danny, maybe none of this would take place?

And it's the first time I can say that the next update is gonna be in THIS week. Something that never happened especially when it always took me more/less than a month to write next chapter. And I promise Nando is coming.

Thank you for leaving a comment <3

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thopix August 2 2013, 00:20:02 UTC
:o the captain was really a big surprise but I like it :o And I feel so sad about Daniel's pain. I hope he'll get totally well soon!!! But I can't wait to Fernando to return to Daniel's life....

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michellejparker August 3 2013, 21:24:25 UTC
So, the new chapter is in. I can't believe I actually posted it already. My God. And from what I can tell, Fernando is well back in Daniel's life.

Thank you for dropping a line here <3

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fernedakki December 31 2013, 02:35:30 UTC
Ok, Mats Hummels? To tell you the truth, I had to google him up because I didn't know who he is! A non-existant ship indeed, LOL! His look, however, suits the character, though I much prefer Dan/Nando or Skrtel/Dan or even Nicklas/Dan, LOL!

This is fun to read, and I hope Dan will be ok and there will be no more drama.

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