Alone.

Mar 25, 2009 20:17

So we haven't had a fic about Michael and Jan since September 9th!!!! And guess who wrote it? I DID! Lol. Well here's just a short fic I wrote. The backstory on this piece is that I actually wrote this for a paper for my English class. We were supposed to write a descriptive essay and I chose to write about Jan and the people she lost in her life. ( Read more... )

fan fiction, author: michaeljanlover

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supertvjunkie March 26 2009, 11:43:21 UTC
"OMG!!" was my first comment when I saw that you wrote a fic lol.
"I love it" was the second one. :)
Yesterday I thought about how long I didn't saw a new MJ fic, so it came with a perfect timing :D so thanks a bunch lol.

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michaeljanlover March 26 2009, 12:59:05 UTC
Awww...you're welcome a bunch! :) Lol...I wish people would write more fics! Just because Jan, is well...JAN, doesn't mean we can't write about her back when she was this BEAUTIFULLY flawed character. Now she's just an ugly flawed memory since she's not on anymore, you know? Anyway, I'm happy you liked this! :)

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supertvjunkie March 26 2009, 16:05:31 UTC
It's sad that she's a "memory". Also it starting to get a bit boring around the office without her, so i hope she'll return soon.

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boredatwork1 March 26 2009, 21:34:33 UTC
Hey I haven't had a chance to read yet. But I will soon!

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michaeljanlover March 27 2009, 04:55:20 UTC
OH its totally fine! Thanks Sho! :)

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michaelnjan4eva March 27 2009, 22:54:51 UTC
*sigh* So beautifully sad.....thank you. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for reminding me of the complicated emotions that are Jan! :D This made me eyes a bit misty if I do say so myself! Wonderful, as always! :DD

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boredatwork1 March 28 2009, 23:11:37 UTC
Finally read it!

It's so wonderfully descriptive! I'm so glad you got the fic-writing going again!

2 Questions--
1. When is this taking place? Is this after they break up after Dinner Party or when they broke up the first time?
2. You wrote that Jan was "praying for the worst and hoping for the best" when she sees Richard's note. I think it's interesting that she would be praying for the worst while still hoping for the best. Is that what you mean or do you mean "preparing for the worst"? Either way is cool, I'm just curious.

Great job!

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michaeljanlover March 28 2009, 23:29:08 UTC
Thanks Shoshana for your nice comment! To answer your questions 1-I never thought about when it took place. I was just completely making it up. and 2-After I turned the paper in and read it again, I saw that little error. I DID mean for it say 'preparing for the worst' I hope the instructor doesn't think anything of it. Like I mentioned in the beginning, I sort of had to rush it towards the end because of time. Lol...anyways, thanks again. I appreciate it!

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boredatwork1 March 28 2009, 23:34:39 UTC
Ohh I see. It's like a time not in the show when she has broken up with Michael. Got it :).

I had a feeling you meant "preparing for the worst" but then I thought it was interesting if she was in fact praying for the worst. Like, deep down she just wanted it to be over with Richard, and Richard leaving her was the easiest way.

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michaeljanlover March 29 2009, 00:01:20 UTC
Right, it wasn't a specific time she broke up with him. I just thought since I was writing it for a paper, that it doesn't really matter. I guess I was thinking, if you really wanted to get the feel of when it was taken place, then it would be after the money episode when we find out that Jan has a bad relationship with her family.

Lol..shoot, I should have made it seem like I WANTED it to be 'praying for the worst', because now that you mention that, that actually makes sense and seems like something Jan would want, deep down. Thanks again! :)

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anonymous April 8 2009, 03:26:40 UTC
I love it! And not just cuz I'm drunk! lol (yes, this is Erin)

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michaeljanlover April 8 2009, 03:34:32 UTC
Lol....is this REALLY Erin or are you just saying that cuz you saw her there? I'm glad you liked it! SO one of these Fridays, we're getting hammered! I can't wait! :)

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anonymous April 10 2009, 02:10:52 UTC
Oh yeah, baby. lol. Let me know when so I can send Hunter out for my vodka. I'm all out, as you know. Hence the drinking of the random fru fru drinks I found in my fridge. Hunter? Are you on? heh heh....

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