I can see clearly now, the rain is gone...

[michaeljanlover]

Here we go! I feel like we haven't had a fic for awhile! This is just a short one though, but I hope you still enjoy it! It's been a fic I've been writing on-and-off for about awhile now and have FINALLY just got the urge to finish and post it. I hope you all enjoy. It takes place sometime after the dinner party episode, but before Jan's pregnancy

Comments

[michaelnjan4eva]

And the crowd goes wild!!! *AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!*
Oh, it is love from the first time I read this fic! (Ok, you caught me....I read it like ten FREAKING times!! Haha) <

[michaeljanlover]

Well I HOPE it seems polish! It DID take like 20 years to write, so...that was like my Johnny Cash momemnt. You know? Where it like takes him forever to write a master piece? Sorry, I like JUST watched "Walk the Line" and "Walk Hard" So I kind of have the story fresh in my head! Especially "Walk Hard" I know it took the guy years to write his master peice. ANYways, I'm glad you liked it and that it made you feel as if you entered a Neutrogena commercial! Lol. Seriously tho, I'm so happy to hear that you think my writing seems better, especially since I'm considering English as a career! Thanks sis! :)

[sillysydney]

I LOVE Walk The Line

[michaeljanlover]

Yes!! Walk the Line is AWESOME! Great music fo sho! :)

[boredatwork1]

I'm so glad you wrote a fic! I hope you will continue it and write another part, especially since you end on such a cliffhanger. I'd love to know how their phone call goes.

I love how Michael asked his date if she'd ever get a boob job. Haha.

[michaeljanlover]

Yay!! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much Shoshana! I'm thinking on a second part, but we'll see if anything comes to mind.

Yeah, especially when he said that SHE said he was the 'biggest slimeball she has ever met.' Lol-its like, okay maybe THAT'S why things didn't 'go well.' SHE was probably the one that didn't like him. Anyways, thanks again! :)

[mmorton65360]

Okay let me first make this about me (only partly joking!)....found out there is still room open on that cruise, and I'm looking into it

[michaeljanlover]

Yeah, I still think you should stop 'looking into it' (lol) and just GO! You'll be glad you did!

I'm glad you enjoyed my fic! I still think it's awesome that you read this stuff without even really knowing what's going on.

As for the grammar-I guess it doesn't matter that much to me since writing fics are just a hobby! I'm sure I would proof read it more if I was turning it in for a paper. I know, that probably doesn't make me a "true writer" but I don't care, it's just for fun and I was trying to finish it and get it posted. Thanks though for going through it and you're right. lol---it wouldn't be feedback from you if you didn't correct my grammar.

Thanks again! I'm glad my 'sara style' showed! I hope to read your post here soon. I'll be sure to explain to you how the LJ-cut and all of that works. I might not get to your piece quite yet since I'm going out to mow the lawn, lol...then later I'm taking my brother to see "the hangover" so yeah...I'll be sure to read it sooner, rather than later!

[sillysydney]

Awwww. I love it. the whole Hansel and Gretel, so funny. It's so cute Michael and his mom interactions. Please continue!

[michaeljanlover]

Thanks so much! :) Since we know how Michael is on the office with always getting his singers/actors mixed up, I figured the whole hansel and gretel thing probably seemed like something he would do/say, you know? Glad you liked! :)

[your_masquerade]

Please write more when you can!!! I want to know how the phone call goes! :D

Oh and the part, "You can't see clearly now. I can see clearly now...the rain is gone, mom!" I thought that was wicked awesome. XD

Good work, I really enjoyed it!

[michaeljanlover]

Well, I'm KIINNNDDDDAAAAA hearing an encore. Lol. I'll see what I can come up with! Thanks for taking the time to read and enjoying it! :)