Comments | michaeljanlover: Missioned Accomplished (MJ Drabble)

michaeljanlover

Missioned Accomplished (MJ Drabble)

Sep 08, 2008 22:47

Here's a little drabble piece I wrote in about 10 or 15 minutes. I've never written a drabble, because as most of you know, I never know how to end the damn thing. Lol. But this, however is pretty short. I wrote it in between one of my classes.

I would definitely say this is AU. It takes place in the bathroom of David Wallace's house. What if Jan ( Read more... )

fanfiction, drabble

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michaelnjan4eva September 9 2008, 05:20:45 UTC

I am like, seriously speechless!!!! WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE A DRABBLE AND NOT AN ACTUAL FIC??!! ;p lol The awesomeness of this fic has literally taken the words out of my mouth! But I will try hard to find some to form into a comment (Who knows how words are formed).

"Fine, you wanna see inappropriate? I'll show you inappropriate."

Forceful Michael?? LOVE IT!! Lmdo! Jan is so tricky! Tricky dicky! TWSS!! lol This really was great! Especially for only writing it in what, 10 to 15 minutes? While class is goin on?? You get an A++ for that alone! Lmfdo God I love this.....*sigh* now you need to make it into a fic lol

michaelnjan4eva September 9 2008, 05:22:04 UTC

The awesomeness of this fic Instead of fic, I meant to say drabble ;p lol

michaeljanlover September 9 2008, 05:56:08 UTC

Lol. When you said tricky dicky that reminded me of The Aristocats. Ever heard of it? Its about cats. Lol. There was a song the cats sang. It was like 'oh a-rinky, tinky tinky...' Well, don't take my word for it...look at the tape.

LMFAO! WOW! I haven't watched that in ages. Its hilarious! You have to watch the whole thing! Especially with the siamese kung fu cat. Lmdo!

Anyways, I'm so happy you liked! And, no, I will NOT make into a fic, because I have nowhere to go but down. Lol. Sersiously, tho, I can't take that 'fic' anywhere....

boredatwork1 September 9 2008, 17:17:29 UTC

I love this song :). I like when the cat says, "Fortune cookie always wrong."

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hopelessfangirl September 9 2008, 05:41:27 UTC

Um, ALL KINDS OF AWESOME. Jan is so slyyy... and as michaelnjan4eva said, forceful!Michael is absolute love. ♥ Great job!

michaeljanlover September 9 2008, 05:57:21 UTC

Awww...I'm so happy you liked this! :D I'm also so happy that I like JUST posted this and you already read and commented! You are so awesome! Thanks! :D

whitneydunbar September 9 2008, 08:22:55 UTC

lmao very nice, Sara. Jan would probably do that, yes.

michaeljanlover September 9 2008, 16:07:34 UTC

Lol. Thanks! I'm glad you liked! :D I can just picture her making him super excited before just leaving him there. Lol.

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michaeljanlover September 9 2008, 16:08:22 UTC

Thanks! :D Isn't is super short though? Well, I'm glad you loved it!

boredatwork1 September 9 2008, 17:19:25 UTC

Hahaha. Nice. Great job :)

michaeljanlover September 9 2008, 17:20:22 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D