Summertime Challenge=Blind dating...

Aug 13, 2008 23:46

Here's my fic for the Summertime Challenge! I hope you all enjoy!

The story behind this fic-It started with just a little idea I had since way back in October (I think). I finally came out and told Elisa and Sky about it. That was around February, March, I think. Anyways Sky liked the idea a lot and told me that I really should write it or she will ( Read more... )

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supertvjunkie August 14 2008, 12:35:30 UTC
Wow this is such a cool idea for a pre-relationship MJ. I love it :D Also liked a lot that you used Men‘s Warehouse. And the whole talking before the date. And at the date. Just really love the fic lol :D

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michaeljanlover August 14 2008, 23:14:33 UTC
Awe...thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this! I'm so happy that I was able to actually write it because back when I first had the idea...it was just a simple them being set up on a blind date...I had nothing else. Lol. Thanks again!

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michaeljanlover August 14 2008, 23:14:51 UTC
Thanks!!! Glad you liked!

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michaelnjan4eva August 14 2008, 22:30:02 UTC
“God! This guy could be an axe murderer for all you know.”

“Cross your fingers.”

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That's definitely one of my favorite lines lol. This was just a frickin' "Get Home From The First Day Of School" treat!!! This fic made me laugh, it made me kinda sad (That Jan got shot down by Michael, of course lol), but the ending was great! Even though I like seeing them together, it's refreshing to have that little twist! Great Job Sista! I love it as always!! lol

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michaeljanlover August 14 2008, 23:15:43 UTC
Thanks again for everything Jordan! I really appreciate it! Glad you liked the ending too! Catch ya later! I hope your first day of school was good! :D

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boredatwork1 August 16 2008, 01:31:08 UTC
Jan's last monologue about marriage and children and dating again is just beautiful. And so real. I can totally hear her saying that. My favorite part is when Jan stops trying to get away from Michael (Mitchell :)) and is just like, the hell with it, I'm going to talk to him. I love them talking about their worst summers.

You are so great at the Michael lines. Favorite one in this fic:

"If by walking in, seeing me, and leaving... you mean walking in, seeing me, and running to the bathroom to freshen up to make an even HOTTER impression because I'm so good looking, then yeah, I bet that's what happened."

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michaeljanlover August 16 2008, 04:14:21 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy you liked that line! Lol. I can totally see him saying that. Also, I'm so tickled pink that you think I write Michael well. He's such a fun person to write! I'm very happy that you liked this! Thanks for the awesome comment!

Also...you actually printed this out? Lol. That is so awesome! :D You are awesome!

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boredatwork1 August 16 2008, 13:03:22 UTC
Hehe. You're welcome :). I just printed it out because I was at work and I was like, I can't read this at work but I can print it out and read it on the way home. Plus, I actually much prefer reading things in hard copy anyway as opposed to on the computer. I don't print out every fic but occasionally if I have a stretch of time during which I'm out and about more than I'm at the computer I'll print out a bunch of stuff to read.

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ironedpolyester August 17 2008, 00:27:46 UTC
Aw, that's a nice au fic (considering Jan told Michael about the divorce at the Chili's Client meeting... but oh well).

I'm still baffled how Michael managed to corall Dan into being his friend. Wow. but they totally sounded like guys without girls being around.

Nice work.

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