A Mountain Of His Life
Fandom: Stargate (both series)
Title: A Mountain Of His Life
Category: Cam/John; AU, drama/angst.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: none.
Summary: He's learned not to ask.
A/N: So the ever lovely
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Title: A Mountain Of His Life
Category: Cam/John; AU, drama/angst.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: none.
Summary: He's learned not to ask.
A/N: So the ever lovely
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John doesn't say anything, just blows softly through the garishly red, dripping circle of the wand, and Cam is disturbed by how obscene it seems to him, a far too appealing taint on the stuff of childhood.
Oh my, isn't that an image. ;)
"I'm doing them a favor. I mean, look at this place. It's so beige I keep thinking I'm going to go snow blind. It's like the Monochromatic Graveyard, where all things beige go to die."
LOL! I liked the patterning/math very much.
John's a klutz when he just walks around their dorm room, but on the boards, either of them, he's graceful in a way that's breathtaking.
Nice images of John surfing and skateboarding. Guh!
Here John is just ass and cock, sweat and semen, pleasure and need.
And this would be a major guh!
And Cam hasn't just learned not to ask; he's learned not to tell.
Loved the repetition of not asking and how it evolved into this.
Fabulous fic! :)
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Well, the pairing was for you, of course, but I was happy that I got all the prompt words in there without having to resort to... well, at least not ridiculous lengths. ;)
Nice images of John surfing and skateboarding. Guh!
I had a nice time imagining a youngish JF, with all that messy hair, wearing only board shorts (in black, of course) and being all wet... wait, was I saying something? I got distracted. *snork*
And this would be a major guh!
But, of course, I hated imagining the sex. Oh, yeah, hated that. What, it could be true. ;)
how it evolved into this
Coolness. That part really did please me, because I'd started the 'he'd learned not to ask' thing before I'd thought of the scene hinting at DADT. I like it when random sentence construction works in my favor. *snicker*
And thanks, missy, I'm glad you liked it. :)
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This is such a quietly sad story... bits and pieces which, somehow, let us see the whole...
Cameron has John completely figured out. No, scratch that, not completely, only in those things that are important.
Both of them are alone, even if they love each other, or maybe, specially if they love each other. There is no hope for them, Cam knows that, probably John knows too. *sad sight*
That scene in the waiting room? John coloring the beige remember me Hawkeye, plastering Frank's legs after doing an amputation. Same desperate childlike humor...
Amazing story!
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The truly sad thing is I was happy when I wrote it, so why it came out all, well, not really 'no happy ending' so much as 'not the ending you could hope for them', I don't know. Part of it might be because deep in my heart I think John belongs with Rodney and Cam belongs with Teal'c. *snork*
Both of them are alone, even if they love each other, or maybe, specially if they love each other
And by their own choices, too, which is always the tragic part of opportunities missed. *sighs with you* Ah, well, we can always imagine that one day, they meet again, and they say to hell with rules and obligations... and have hot sex again. ;)
And thanks, you, I'm very pleased you liked the story. :)
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