Comments | mia_dcwut_09: Twilight: sereis: Bound, Ch 7

mia_dcwut_09

Twilight: sereis: Bound, Ch 7

Oct 25, 2009 23:39

The young native sat on a log just outside the beach of La Push, watching the tides make their way towards the beach then slip back into the ocean. He couldn’t help but to think of how quickly life had changed for him. It had been five months since finding out he had imprinted on a vampire, his mortal enemy, and now he was carrying a child… his ( Read more... )

character: rosalie cullen, length: series/multi-chapter, series: bound, character: pack, character: emmett cullen, rating: m, character: leah clearwater, character: paul, character: jacob black, character: alice cullen, warning: mpreg, media: fic, character: carlisle cullen, pairing: jacob/edward, fandom: twilight

Comments 11

Author Speaking mia_dcwut_09 October 26 2009, 04:50:57 UTC

At last the baby is born. I know Yoali isn’t that Native American but its Aztec for night wind, which is technically still a native name (lol) and I really like the name.
So Jacob only delivered until Paul got there, what could that mean? How close are Paul and Jacob, and how will they relationship effect Edward when he returns?
Don’t forget to feed the muses
Mia

christinaannc October 26 2009, 05:06:31 UTC

i love it. me and one of my best friends have been waiting forever for this chapter. i dont care about how long it took cause this is an awesome chapter. i cant wait for another chapter to come out“Carlisle, I’m not going to do whatever you tell me until Paul gets here,” Jacob pleaded this makes it confussing. cause why would jake want paul? is he starting to like paul more than a frien? if so that would be so weird. but hey i love this and cant wait for more

mia_dcwut_09 October 26 2009, 05:13:23 UTC

thanks im glad you guys are still with me and sticking with this story.
As for Paul and Jacob its a mystery that will soon be revealed lol its just another twist to this fic of mine lol
thanks again for reading

mzhollywood1994 October 27 2009, 23:47:58 UTC

omg seriously! Me and ^^^ Her, the one up there, Tina, have waited soooo long for this!

Wow....so is eddie coming back soon? b/c if he skips out of his little vampwofl child i will jump thru time and space and reality and ounch him in the junk....just saying...

mia_dcwut_09 October 28 2009, 03:56:07 UTC

lol wow i like your plan for edward
dont worry he will come back soon hopefully
thanks for reading and reviewing

davii_hime October 26 2009, 06:13:53 UTC

Oooh! Someone's getting attached to Paul :p

I love fics where they mix in a little jealousy, makes 'em so much more interesting.

mia_dcwut_09 October 26 2009, 15:18:18 UTC

LOL Thanks glad you like it
thanks for reviewing

avari_maethor October 26 2009, 11:30:34 UTC

:DDDDD Hooray! -does the new chapter dance-

I really like the scene with Jake on the beach... and then him squeezing the hell out of Paul's hand. XD

mia_dcwut_09 October 26 2009, 15:19:22 UTC

LOL thanks it was fun writing IT
I like seeing tough guys brought to their knees

blemery1 November 9 2009, 05:25:37 UTC

I really like that chapter. I wonder if Jacob could have a c-section, wouldn't his "wound" heal just as quickly as it was made. a c-section cut is only a few inches and then they stretch the skin. So I can't image it would take that long to heal, less time then it would take to get the baby out, or even to cut it all. I am not sure about this Paul/Jacob thing.

mia_dcwut_09 November 9 2009, 05:32:18 UTC

Hey i thought about that when I was writing the chapter I was debating whether i wanted natural or c-section so i flipped a coin and natural won.
You're not alone on the paul/jacob thing
many others feel the same
and honestly I really dont have their relationship planned out i just go with the flow.
thanks for reading and reviewing