Twilight: Playing

[mia_dcwut_09]

Fandom: Twilight;orginally written for

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[mia_dcwut_09]

Okay so this is my first ever Twilight and jakeward fic. Its not the best but I hope you like it. I have so many ideas for this pairing and I just thought I'd start with a small drabble.
I hope yall dont want to kill me for killing one of our boys but I couldnt help it; like they say "the pen is mighter than the sword" FYI I havent really planned out how jacob died. This fic was just nagging at me and I had to write it. But I figured it would work because jacob is still half human after all.
FEEDING THE MUSES IS VERY MUCH APPERCIATED!
Take Care
Mia

[animaven]

Just a small comment regarding the colors you use as writing on a black background. They are not an easy read. Any chance of you changing them in the future to something more easily read.

[mia_dcwut_09]

okay will do

[animaven]

Thanks.

New Colors

[animaven]

Just went back, and I really like the new color selection. Easier to read, and pretty too.

[harpsi_fizz]

I liked it- loved it, in fact. And I am not a Twilight fan at all.

So, feeding those muses... yeah. Well, that line about Jacob's presence and innocence... I'd love to hear about both at once. You know, lying beside Jacob while he slept; set it before Bella shows up. Or better, maybe bring up the concept of how while he lies with Bella he's always wanting more, but with Jacob, it's enough just to lay with him? Seems like you could make a case as to why that's evidence of a stronger form of love.

[mia_dcwut_09]

hmmm you certainly are feeding the muses just not sure how id come about to that imprinting maybe yet that seems clicheic but it works thanks for the review and suggestion. I wrote another small drabble implying jacob/edward and emmett in it.
im not a big fan of twilight just this couple thats im reading just reading the books to read them

[mia_dcwut_09]

thank you so much for that comment
I think ill add more to this drabble and make a small series out of it

[latex_muffins]

Just saying, I love that song.

Also - this is so sad D;
poor Edward, all pining for Jacob. :/

[mia_dcwut_09]

thanks im glad you liked it
i might do a small series about jacob's death or whatever

[latex_muffins]

OH NOES
I WOULD CRY D;

[mia_dcwut_09]

im not sure about it im still thinking about it