Fic: The Learning Curve (part three) - Liev Schreiber/Ryan Reynolds, NC-17

Aug 21, 2009 12:13

Title: The Learning Curve, part three
Pairing: Liev Schreiber/Ryan Reynolds
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: RPS
Disclaimer: the following is entirely fictional and intends to cause no harm or to generate any profit

Notes: with many thanks to niceandfluffy, fourleftxaviers and everyone else who has shown enthusiasm for this series. This was supposed to be the final part, but I have ( Read more... )

ryan reynolds, nc-17, rps, fic, liev schreiber

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niceandfluffy August 21 2009, 12:16:00 UTC
*happy sigh*

Utterly perfect, although somewhat sad - I have a horrible feeling there's that chapter out there when they break up *wails*

Thanks for continuing with the series, I do love it so :D

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mi_thirteen August 21 2009, 12:37:13 UTC
Thanks for the uber quick feedback, m'dear.

I'm glad it pleased. I do so enjoy writing it. Although making Ryan sad seems somehow against nature. There's an imbalance in the universe that must be set right (i.e. I promise that my Ryan/Taylor will be nothing but hot sexings and none of this terrible angst).

Part four is forming in my mind already...

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ladyames August 21 2009, 18:00:02 UTC
Seeing this on my f-list made me so very happy. ^_^

This is so... sad and hot and... well, I have to admit, I love me some angst.

Ummm... I think I was going to say something else but I seem to have forgotten it. Oops.

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mi_thirteen August 21 2009, 18:19:48 UTC
Oh, hello icon!

I know what you mean, I'm such a sucker for angst. It's hard to imagine this kind of set up being totally without angst, but I like to crank it up a little. It makes the sex that much more needy and clingy and GUH. Or something.

Thanks for commenting. I'm glad it could provide a pleasing distraction for a few minutes :)

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fourleftxaviers August 21 2009, 18:39:46 UTC
EEEEEE IT WAS HUGH.

... oh yes.

The sex bits were so short and yet so delicious. You make every word count. I certainly love me some sex scenes that go on and on and on, but here, the brevity and delicacy is totally what makes the eroticism. And some of the lines: "Kinda like this?" Liev looked away. and "Be good, Ryan." Utterly perfect. Poor Ryan is so smitten and so anxious and so melty for Liev. I'm glad you think this might not be the last you write of these two, because I really dig the way you handle this pairing.

In closing, IT WAS HUGH. I don't know why I wanted to know that so badly, but I did.

Thank you for this.

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mi_thirteen August 21 2009, 18:56:01 UTC
I remembered that you wanted to know and this kinda came about because niceandfluffy was gunning for Hugh to be involved. I think she wanted a threesome, but I didn't want to terrify poor Ryan just yet ;)

So this way everyone was appeased...

And luckily for me the timing works out perfectly. I'd plucked six years out of thin air and it turned out it's been six years since Kate and Leopold was released. Kismet, yo.

It seems like it would be intrusive to go into any more detail with their bedroom antics... so I'll leave it to your imagination ;)

I don't know where I'll go next, but I can't leave these lovely boys just yet.

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shadowteller August 22 2009, 10:00:56 UTC
I knew it was Hugh. I knew it! >.>; If only I had posted that in my last comment... BUT I KNEW IT!

I feel like Ryan = me in this series... It felt to Liev that he held on a little tighter. Is exactly what I would have done, even if I tried not to. Poor guy...

"How would you feel about fucking me?" Liev asked philosophically.

:: gulps loudly :: Oh. My.

He wanted to say it all.

This keeps me afloat. I need it. You don't know what it means. You don't know how you make me feel. I'll miss you. I think, dearest Ryan, you are trying desperately to skim over the words you seem to mean: "As you wish."

>.>;

Is it bad that I can see him so easily as a certain Dread Pirate?

<.<;

Ryan walked out of the hotel, wondering when Hugh had realized that Liev had changed his life and if it had felt anything like this. Somehow I get the feeling that it was Hugh who left... and that it did in fact feel like that, and that's why it scarred them so damn much ( ... )

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mi_thirteen August 23 2009, 19:37:40 UTC
Wow... heh! I'm glad to inspire such pondering and wondering and ranting. Honestly, I'm so grateful to everyone who takes the time to read and to comment on my fics, so thank you very much for your enthusiastic embrace of my little universe :)

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rekindle956 August 24 2009, 06:03:41 UTC
Hey, new layout!

Must...refrain...bodyswap plotbunnies...

Liev kissed him properly when they said goodbye. It was the kind of kiss that was usually reserved for train stations in old films. He held Ryan's head in his hands and pressed tiny kisses to his lips while they caught their breath. And I can see that. Thank you!

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mi_thirteen August 24 2009, 08:48:52 UTC
Yeah, fugly though. I tried to do something clever with it last night, but I don't have the technical nous. Grr.

Bodyswap plotbunnies...? Do tell!

You're most welcome. Thanks for reading once again and thank you for the feedback :)

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Crack! Sorry for the delayed and possibly incoherent reply. rekindle956 August 29 2009, 07:13:36 UTC
So there's Liev/Ryan and Hugh/Taylor (and I don't think I have ever read H/T before) and Liev bodyswaps with Hugh and they start hanging out more and more because of that and Ryan&Taylor are like WTF? and they confront their boyfriends...with sexy results. Did I just conjured RPS foursome?

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Re: Crack! Sorry for the delayed and possibly incoherent reply. mi_thirteen September 1 2009, 19:25:43 UTC
First and foremost, there's plenty of Hugh/Taylor over at xmen_rps

Secondly... intriguing idea. Are you gonna write it?!

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