KR W: All the Melting Snow in Spring

Jun 12, 2011 11:56

Title: All the Melting Snow in Spring
Fandom: Kamen Rider W
Character: Shoutarou/Philip
Rating: PG
Warning: -
Summary: It happens only once.

And all the cherry blossoms in the world can't keep us from-- )

length: one shot, fandom: kamen rider w, pairing: shoutarou/philip

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rin_harui June 12 2011, 05:19:24 UTC
;o;

I really miss the both of them. Awesome job btw~! ^^

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mi_key June 13 2011, 00:09:47 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! :D
Thank you for reading and commenting! \^0^/

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mi_key June 13 2011, 00:14:17 UTC
Hee :D
Glad you enjoyed it!^^

Thank you for reading and commenting! \^0^/

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honou_no_izumi June 12 2011, 12:24:02 UTC
Nice. Though... the extra ", and." on two sentences kinda jarred me from the fic. And in some instances in the passage where you had some of those unfinished thoughts/words/narrations, perhaps you could have used ellipses for that? Just a thought.

Off topic but unless there are some people actually assumed the fanwriters are the original writer and owner of the series, it should be okay to not include the disclaimers there. Cos I saw this and almost thought.... wait, does the disclaimer means this fic was not written by you?

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mi_key June 13 2011, 00:07:59 UTC
Regarding the disclaimer, I know it's not exactly necessary to put one when we all know it's a fic anyway, but. Um. It's just that I've been told off once for not putting up a disclaimer in the header of my old fic before, so I guess I was just trying to be on the safe side? xPPP

LOL I should've also probably written it properly with the whole 'the characters belong to TOEI, this is written purely for fun and there's no profit made...' only I got lazy and just shortened it to 'not mine' xDDD

...I just realize it could actually lead to a misunderstanding *__*
I'll fix the header asap >__<

Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting!^^

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katherinekate June 12 2011, 15:42:55 UTC
I miss W!! Thank you for sharing, really appreciate everyone writing and keeping the awesomeness of Team W going!

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mi_key June 13 2011, 00:39:10 UTC
I miss W too! >_<
Hee :D
Glad you enjoyed this!^^

Thank you for reading and commenting! \^0^/

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