I quite liked C4, even if it was a transition chapter. It had real emotional punch- you actually felt with and for Buffy, at least I did, even when I wanted to shake her. Well, I couldn't decide if I wanted to shake her or hug her, but it was very well done.
Dawn was good also, her desire to have her friends and sister taken care of, but also wanting to stand on her own two feet. She handled Buffy's over protective mutterings with class- and shows how much she's grown up.
Oh, don't get me wrong. I like the chapter as well. It's just not a big shiny action chapter! (I had a reviewer tell me that it seems like Buffy's clinically depressed. Duh).
I like writing grown-up!Dawn. She's seven years old now, and can handle herself accordingly :)
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Dawn was good also, her desire to have her friends and sister taken care of, but also wanting to stand on her own two feet. She handled Buffy's over protective mutterings with class- and shows how much she's grown up.
All in all, I thought it worked well.
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I like writing grown-up!Dawn. She's seven years old now, and can handle herself accordingly :)
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