Comments | mhalachaiswords: Immutability (Criminal Minds) PG

mhalachaiswords

Immutability (Criminal Minds) PG

Feb 27, 2010 19:26

So I've been watching some most all Criminal Minds over the last little while. I lurve it. Have a ficlette I wrote as part of my attempt to get over this tedious writer's block.

Immutability
A Criminal Minds story
by mhalachaiswords

Summary: Once part of the team, always part of the team. That's what Spencer told himself as he walked up the stairs.
Characters: ( Read more... )

fic: criminal minds

Comments 41

jebbypal February 28 2010, 03:38:13 UTC

Oh, lovely. Nice twist there at the end.

mhalachaiswords February 28 2010, 03:39:41 UTC

Thanks. Once the idea occurred to me, I simply had to write this. They're surrounded by so much death, I wanted to explore the "what if"s in this.

firefox1490 February 28 2010, 03:47:22 UTC

OMG WHAT IS THIS!!! When did you start writing Criminal Minds fic *dies*

mhalachaiswords February 28 2010, 04:13:03 UTC

When did you start writing Criminal Minds fic

at about 11am this morning. Actually, I've had about five CM fics percolating in my head since I finished watching Season 4 (a few months ago) but this was the first idea that coalesced into a story :D I love this show so hard.

firefox1490 March 2 2010, 05:25:11 UTC

You know that I absolutely love you right?

CM is like my obsession right now. No joke at all. CM needs more fic in it. Its pool of fic both character driven and case bases is woefully lacking.

I'm writing a Criminal Minds/Supernatural/Joan of Arcadia fic and its amazing.

azraelz_angel February 28 2010, 04:50:50 UTC

Awww, wow, that just sucker punched me. Great job! I'm so glad you ventured into the CM fandom and wrote this gen-non-crossover piece! :)

mhalachaiswords February 28 2010, 05:09:05 UTC

CM is awesome, and so full of possibilities for fic. I had a lot of fun with the technical aspects of this piece. And man, poor Spencer. The idea of how he would deal with this situation, stayed with me.

Thanks for your comment :)

jujuberry136 February 28 2010, 04:51:58 UTC

Yay! CM fic from you! Woo hoo! And CM is so much fun to cross too... *encourages*

Love your Spencer Reid POV. Lovely tone throughout the whole piece and I definitely did not see the twist coming. I thought for sure the funeral was for Hotch or some other member of the BAU. All the little things for CM were just *there*

Really enjoyed those. I'm keeping my fingers crossed you decide to write more CM fic!

mhalachaiswords February 28 2010, 05:03:14 UTC

CM is perfect to cross, I have to say. Every show out there could have a serial killer, right?

Spencer is a joy to write, and he's my fave character on the show. It doesn't hurt that MGG is so interesting :)

The twist was what pushed me into writing this piece. It was hard, trying to leave the breadcrumbs but not give it away. But aside from the story, it was a good challenge.

Thanks for your comment!

beatrice_otter February 28 2010, 05:10:58 UTC

Ooh, CM fic from one of my favorite writers! Yay! I liked what you did here, and how I'm not sure whether it's grief or if Spencer's having a breakdown (though this would be an extremely atypical hallucination for onset of schizophrenia).

(I just wish you were posting this on DreamWidth, where my CM icon is.)

mhalachaiswords February 28 2010, 06:05:01 UTC

It could be grief, or finally a breakdown, or maybe something a little different :) I like ambiguity. I also like CM like a burning thing... I heart crime shows with a quirky cast.

Thanks for your comment and your lovely compliment :)