FIC: Never Lie Down (SG1/FF) (oneshot)

[mhalachaiswords]

Oh man, I am so late for a party. But that's okay. Here, have some fanfic with a very ironic icon.

Never Lie Down
A Stargate SG-1/Firefly crossover
Characters: All of them!
Disclaimer: MGM/UA, Gekko Productions et al. own all things Stargate SG-1. Joss Whedon et al. own Firefly. I'm only borrowing and will return them at the end of the fic.

Comments

[jaydeyn_sitari]

*goes back with eraser and starts rubbing furiously at the the end*

nononononono! No end! That was... well, the word that springs to mind is beautiful, yet what happened was horrendous. The chaos of the battle, the absolutely spot-on movements and voices of the characters, the blend of the two universes (which, really, shouldn't be surprising anymore with you) - all of it was beautifully done.

I particularly liked More screaming filled the radio, and shouting, and bullet fire. Daniel knew that sound, a screaming so desperate and hopeless and tortured, it made him want to start screaming himself.

The background screaming still came through the speakers, almost blocking a gibbering that made Daniel want to hide, to kill something, anything to make that gibbering stop.

Daniel knows about Reavers from being all ascend-y? Scary notion. And River in all her technicolour-kick-ass-glory.

Beautiful.

:)
Jaydeyn

[mhalachaiswords]

your icon is cracking me up.

The way I wrote this, I didn't plan for Daniel to know about the Reavers, but just the insane not-quite-human-but-too-damned-close noise was driving Daniel bonkers. It's just plain *wrong*

I was trying to be more lyrical in my writing. It's really the only way to describe such horrible things.

The chaos of the battle

It's very difficult to write a mass of things happening all at once. I tend to try and get as much in as short a space as possible, a paragraph on each, so the impact of the fight can be understood in a short space.

[jaydeyn_sitari]

Master-y goodness is always good and though I first saw Anthony Ainsley in the role, I've found that Roger Delgado has stolen my heart...

Ahhh and now my brain works :) - yes, yes that works too! With the nutso screaming and so forth. Makes perfect sense. *smacks brain with work-now juice*

I was trying to be more lyrical in my writing.

Mission accomplished :)

The very visual, snapshot of motion type of thing certainly works for you. ... ah! The word I was searching for in my still not working brain is tight. It's very tight writing ~ which is going to make your original stuff a treat no doubt. :)

:)
Jaydeyn

[cissasghost]

Damn. You are smoking copious quantities of crack, you know that?

*gives you more*

. . you're gonna continue this, right?

-Sonya

[mhalachaiswords]

Hee. I may continue later, not sure. I've got *so* much else to write. I mapped out the end of Inevitable. I've got 14 chapters to go. 14 very loooong chapters.

[dizzy_lizard]

Oh, I loved it! Please... if you find the time, more in this 'verse would be greatly appreciated.

[mhalachaiswords]

Thanks! I may add to this at a later date... who knows? We'll see how it goes :)

[dvak_64]

Gorram it, good!

Very good!

But why, why does it end? I can tell that you're itching to keep it up, so why don't you? Come on, let's see some more!!

[mhalachaiswords]

:D Glad you like it!

It ended because this movement was done. If I have time, I may do more. Maybe. Once Inevitable is done :)

[shallanelprin]

One shot? Please, please not a one shot. It's too good to just be a one shot. Maybe a plot bunny for after Inevitable's done? More, pretty please?

Oh, yeah, great story :) So River can talk to Daniel in his head huh? What is it about that boy and off planet girls?

[mhalachaiswords]

I may continue later. I've got an idea for a follow up (and don't tell anyone, but yes, it's Daniel/River). I wasn't going to have morel, but as I said elsewhere on this thread, I had An Idea.

We'll see how things go. It's a crazy week. Heck, a wacky month too.

[shallanelprin]

Daniel + anyone = awsome.

Heh, you can tell who my favorite character is. *squee*

and yes, I loved this ficcie.

[sorceress_death]

... it would be nice if i signed in. >.< *points above* Tis me