ooo... I get to be first. Well, other than the typical 'you are so brill, I worship your ffic abilities, & can't wait for more' stuff, I am deeply amused at the test paper bit. Of course, I know Jack is v. intellligent & just might give Sam a run for her money if he had gone the physics route, but Mini-Jack's test having to be graded by a college prof because he used just de-classified info was great. 1 question, I thought Richard was a biology teacher. Is there a staff shortage or do all the science teachers teach an advanced class in their field and a general class?
There's a staff shortage, I've decided. Also, I'm taking liberties with the class structure of senior high, as I have no idea how things go and want Jack in a general sciece class for cameo apperance purposes to be made clear in part three. I figure that since I'm writing a sci-fi/fantasy mix, people will forgive me mangling the educational system. I hope.
Forgiven, not that edu systems aren't already messed up. Actually, it's a bit realistic with how chaotic the AB-verse is that staff shortages mean that teachers have to teach classes they wouldn't normaly.
Nice use of the mini-Jack. Having plenty of younger relatives and working with the school system, I have plenty of experience with the "I already know what you're going to do. Can we just cut to the part where I hurt you?" feeling of tired that kids with that much less milage on them can cause.
Have I told already that I like this fic?? Well if I haven't consider it said. Great Fic.
About the only thing I could suggest is *not* to make Mini-Jack into a Were at some point. Having to deal with their teen years all over again would be enough for *anyone* to take.
Anyway I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
Of course, I can't say much without giving away the plot, but I'll just say that Jack's alreayd got so many problems without being a werewolf that it would just be really very mean.
*g* thanks so much. I love it when a crossover falls into place so easily... in fact, that's the only way I can really write them. My brain's got this automatic crossover button in it. Add fandoms, a dash of salt, and frappe.
The Russia incident
This kind of thing is like how we think. You know, going along, see a red van, and think of that time with the red van and the ice cream 10 years ago. It's human, and so much easier to read than the Exposition Chapter.
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1 question, I thought Richard was a biology teacher. Is there a staff shortage or do all the science teachers teach an advanced class in their field and a general class?
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There's a staff shortage, I've decided. Also, I'm taking liberties with the class structure of senior high, as I have no idea how things go and want Jack in a general sciece class for cameo apperance purposes to be made clear in part three. I figure that since I'm writing a sci-fi/fantasy mix, people will forgive me mangling the educational system. I hope.
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I love how Jack in addapting to his new home. Though I think I'm happy for any distaction while waiting for my laptop to be done. *whine*
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Ah, kids. Glad I was never one. Oh wait.
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About the only thing I could suggest is *not* to make Mini-Jack into a Were at some point. Having to deal with their teen years all over again would be enough for *anyone* to take.
Anyway I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
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Of course, I can't say much without giving away the plot, but I'll just say that Jack's alreayd got so many problems without being a werewolf that it would just be really very mean.
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The Russia incident
This kind of thing is like how we think. You know, going along, see a red van, and think of that time with the red van and the ice cream 10 years ago. It's human, and so much easier to read than the Exposition Chapter.
More soon :)
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