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thelonebamf in mgs_slash

Amateur Fanfiction Ahoy!

Sep 30, 2009 21:23

Title: Dolly
Pairing: Snake/Otacon (If you think really hard about the last little bit and squint and hope)
Rating: G so, so, G
Warnings: Sucky writing? Uh... first fic for me in this series. And like my fourth fanfiction ever. (Concrit is welcome!)
Note: Thanks a TON to origin_blue and yamitami for beta reading this for me. (As did my boyfriend. ( Read more... )

fanfic, 2009, snake/otacon

Comments 14

bella_clover October 2 2009, 05:53:06 UTC

I love these fics that portaits Dave's background. I love how you compared him to Rex, that was really clever!

Love it! <3

thelonebamf October 2 2009, 17:47:14 UTC

I'm embarrassed to admit it, but that wasn't even something I planned out while plotting this story, it was just something that happened as I started writing. Stupid Otacon, get out of my head! Or... y'know... don't. ;)

bella_clover October 3 2009, 04:55:54 UTC

Oh don't worry about it. To be honest, I think it adds more to thew fic when things come out naturally, and for something that actually did, you wrote that part really well. <3

thelonebamf October 3 2009, 05:07:37 UTC

Thanks. I'll try to keep that in mind as I work on other fics. :D

onesto_hotel October 3 2009, 21:50:26 UTC

Aww, we talked about premature aging of clones like Dolly in my genetics class, and all I could think of was poor old Snake. Shortened telomeres and all that jazz. Cute little fic though. :)

(Of course it doesn't help that I drew a picture of sheep!Snake in my notes after that...)