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Still going Stray

Jun 10, 2008 19:11

Stray - Chapter 67

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Stray - Chapter 68

Concerning an offer.

There were things you could see out of the corner of your eye, almost. Maybe if you turned around a little faster. Was there something about that bust wrapped in cloth by the wall, or the portrait of a laughing man? There was the feeling that cut deeper than deja vu, not that you ( Read more... )

"stray", fanfic, 2008, mgs1, multichapter, mgs3, mgs2, ocelot/otacon, time paradox

Comments 4

chocobayashi June 11 2008, 04:59:46 UTC

I don't know if it's moon phases or some weird pressure in the area lately, but the story's going over my head abit. I still love Stray to death so many chapters lately, I feel so spoiled! but I find that instead of focusing on the big picture im looking at other things. Such as:

~Schrodinger's cat in Pandora's box
~Mantis's toes (almost) knocking a pen over
~Hal walking back and forth while Adamska follows
~Adamska looking for a blood stain that was never there.
~Ocelot 'really' wanting to shoot Mantis, whether the bullets can hit him or not

Lol, maybe I just love all the small details too much

_dahne_ June 11 2008, 05:50:51 UTC

That's probably my fault for not making things clear enough.

Now that we're in the final stretch, I'm finally clearing out the backlog. I'm lazy about editing and posting, can you tell? XD

I'm glad that you liked the details. Those are fun to put in. Those weird things you notice. Schrodinger's cat and Pandora's box keep cropping up again and again, so it's only natural they'd end up together. And you just know Adamska wouldn't be able to help looking.

dontdiefox June 11 2008, 20:47:25 UTC

Mantis obviously has a nice carpet because he's working on his secret dream of becoming a world famous interior designer. But yeah, he's adorable and I love that you put him in this. Anything with Mantis is hovering mindfucker win.

Hal is mad scientist insane and adorable, and god you seem to exploit that so much and I love you for that~ <3 He's just so cute. In Hal parts I'm always going back and forth from "awww" to "IDIOT" to "somehow that makes sense even though it really shouldn't". And then back to awww because Hal.

"I CAN REMEMBER REMEMBERING IT". I swear that's one of the best and most stupid sounding things he's ever said. And yet he's a freaking genius. ...Hooow? Hal's logic is ridiculous, but honestly it's probably one of the few things helping him to survive in the crazy world that is au!MGS. I'm gonna commend Ocelot for putting up with him this long as well as he does. And for Mantis...I'm amazed it's not painful for him to listen to Hal just think. Or, I dunno. Process all his thoughts, conspiracy theories ( ... )

_dahne_ June 11 2008, 21:50:45 UTC

I love Mantis. He's such an odd and fascinating guy, and with a lot of potential for playing with. It's fun to write dialogue when one person is getting extra bits of the conversation.

I love mad scientists, too. Especially ones like Hal. And I absolutely adore things that make sense when they shouldn't. That's the central goal, in fact.

Well, all the ridiculous things that somehow work are what makes it interesting, in my opinion. Though it's another mind Mantis shouldn't get too close to. "Hey, what's EvangeliAHHH GOD."

Thank you for reading!