You guys had better love me after this. XP

Dec 30, 2004 20:22

[Title] Unpredictable
[Fandom] Metal Gear Solid 3
[Pairing] Naked Snake/Ocelot; [mild] The Sorrow/The Boss
[Rating] R; cussing, boylove
[Word Count] 1,629
[Summary] Gift for vwl. It can also work as an entry for the Get Ocelot Naked! Challenge. It takes place directly after The Sorrow battle, and I won't say anymore so as not to spoil. A few things ( Read more... )

fanfic, r, 2004, mgs3, big boss/ocelot

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vwl December 31 2004, 04:38:42 UTC
............... <333333333333333333 XD I love you. And I love the ending the bestest. <3

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burningvigor December 31 2004, 04:54:50 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, dear.

Heh. Jack's so funny. "You're sexy, but I'm on a strict No Sex While On The Mission policy. Sorry! ::WHAM.::"

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vwl December 31 2004, 04:56:17 UTC
Is it bad that you inspired me to write The Boss/The Sorrow, though? XD ::is shot, as she's posting this in the slash community::

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burningvigor December 31 2004, 05:23:19 UTC
No, not at all! Inspiration is great, no matter what it's for. And after all, that pairing rocks all KINDS of socks.

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kinneas December 31 2004, 04:40:02 UTC
Dude. So much awesome, seriously. It was perfect, despite the considerably less amount of queerboy vibes I got from Jack than Dave. From a literary standpoint, excellent use of diction. It had a light, airy, colourful feeling that matched the content well. A+.

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burningvigor December 31 2004, 04:55:49 UTC
I agree with you about Jack and his straight-ness, actually. He did this more to piss Ocelot off and let him know who was boss [no pun intended].

Glad you liked! <3

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burningvigor December 31 2004, 05:23:42 UTC
Thank you! ^__^

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burningvigor December 31 2004, 05:45:56 UTC
YAY I GOT HIM TO STRIP. ^______^ ::Dances in victory.::

Yeah. It's that pouting and grumpiness that makes him cute sometimes. ::Pets him.::

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electrumicity December 31 2004, 13:43:02 UTC
::worship worship::

Great job ^_^

I need to write a Jack/Ocelot fic of my own, but... ::groan:: My writing suuuuuucks.

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burningvigor December 31 2004, 23:08:59 UTC
Thanks! ^^;;

Aww, come on! You can do it! :O!

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