I think this is my first time posting here. Anyway, I don't usually write fanfiction but the second I saw Ocelot in MGS3... well. In any case, here it is
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Awesome work, man - very well-written, and you captured Ocelot very well, I thought. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Adam, though, poor little fanboy ^_^
I've been an Ocelot/Sergei fan since before MGS3 came out, and to see you write something like this made me a very happy fangirl, I must admit. I've had ideas for writing bits of that pairing, though now that I've read this, I'm not sure what I'll do about that. XD Perhaps some scenes from later on during the game and such ... <33
Anyways, I adored this. People never really acknowledge Sergei, and you captured his young persona in a way similar to how I thought of him. That's some crazy ESP. XD Also, you wrote a great Ocelot. I especially liked the end.
Uhm. I'm sorry, but I dont think that thats the Sergei youre thinking of. Actually, I dont know who youre talking about. I used the name Sergei because my friend suggested it. So..who is he?
But thanks a lot! If it makes you feel better, you can pretend that I was writing about your Sergei : )
Ahhh, have you played MGS2? You know ... Sergei Gurlukovich? The strong communist Russian motherland-loving guy that is supposedly Ocelot's best friend, although he tends up tragically betraying him during the Tanker mission? Yeah, that guy. They also mention him in MGS1 ... apparently Liquid & Ocelot were going to get in contact with him to supply them with more supplies so they could stage a large, long resistance in Shadow Moses, but that all went to hell, of course. XD He'd the reason Liquid has a Hind, etc.
Dude! I'd forgotten about him, too! Olga's dad, right? That actually ties in really well, making him a member of Ocelot's team.... even if it *was* unintentional.....
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Ive been trying to reply all day, but LJ keeps screwing up : /
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Anyways, I adored this. People never really acknowledge Sergei, and you captured his young persona in a way similar to how I thought of him. That's some crazy ESP. XD Also, you wrote a great Ocelot. I especially liked the end.
Very nice. <33333
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But thanks a lot! If it makes you feel better, you can pretend that I was writing about your Sergei : )
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Ocelot was cuter when he was younger~^o^
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