Comments | mggrubb85: Last Week in Konoha: Night 4, Part 1

mggrubb85

Last Week in Konoha: Night 4, Part 1

Dec 09, 2009 02:40

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mggrubb85 December 9 2009, 20:13:42 UTC

Yeah, I don't see why more people don't do more with that pairing, it makes the most sense of any fan pairing, IMO. I also have them get together in previous chapters, if you'd like to check them out.

heehe December 10 2009, 14:13:26 UTC

OMG, I kept smiling through the whole thing. The dinner between choji and shika was sooooooooooooooooo fluffy *squirms with the clouds and rainbows and unicorns flying inside me*. OMG. I couldn't stop smiling. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.

So cute, they were feeding each other. :)

I WANT EVERYTHING RAMEN.

I wonder how kiba and naruto's gonna cover up the wet spots in front of their pants. O_O

I loooooooved this chapter. It's soooooooooo fluffy. I love fluffy. Fluffy is gooooooooooooood. *big smile*

The only part that weird-ed me out was when naruto started crying. I cannot imagine the guy crying. My brain wouldn't process it.

*waits eagerly for the next chapter*

mggrubb85 December 11 2009, 07:09:57 UTC

It wasn't just Shikamaru yelling at him that had tears streaming down his face, it was also all of the smoke he inhaled, although I suppose I should have put something in about Shikamaru and Choji having tears on their faces. Oh well. Besides, Naruto cries all the time, like in the first chapter, or when they leave the Land of Waves, and probably a few im forgetting. I'm taking a break from writing the next chapter of Last Week and Journey to write this, they are both coming along nicely, and hope to have them up soon. Thank you both for the comments, it makes writing all the more fun to know that people are reading (and loving)my fics.

Again, I thank you.

p.s.-I have been drinking (it's the only way I can write anything without being too critcal of myself), so if this sounds overly mushy or something, please forgive.

heehe December 11 2009, 07:23:46 UTC

OMG YOUR DISPLAY PIC. <3

Oh, okay, I never thought about the smoke stinging their eyes. Cool. :D

I'll be waiting for your next chapter. *big smile*
I'll tryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy my best to imagine the dude crying. ._.
Naw, it doesn't sound mushy at all.

esonen December 12 2009, 07:25:08 UTC

Great chapter ^^ To be truthful, I kinda just skimmed through the chouji and shikamaru stuff...but it's because I LOVE the kibanaru stuff you write, it's so cute! Absolutely love your stories : )

mggrubb85 December 12 2009, 07:41:11 UTC

Thats ok, I don't expect everyone toe read every word. I like to skim over stories until I get to the juicy parts myself, unless something catches my interest.