A Halloween Treat for Bonniejean1953

Oct 30, 2021 05:52

Title: Looking Out
Genre: slashish
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1634
Prompt:
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2021 halloween challenge, 2021 halloween story, slash

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lindafishes8 October 30 2021, 17:20:03 UTC
This was delightfully spooky. I loved the clothing Napoleon put on.

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lee_the_t October 31 2021, 02:14:21 UTC
I thought "But isn't that exactly the sort of thing that might happen if you were dreaming? Weird crazy clothes?"

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spikesgirl58 October 31 2021, 13:11:26 UTC
That seem perfectly normal at the time! Thanks for reading!

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spikesgirl58 October 31 2021, 13:12:02 UTC
Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun at poor Napoleon's expense with this one! :DD

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lee_the_t October 31 2021, 02:13:44 UTC
Love it. I thought Illya might be dead like Sammy (glad he wasn't, although that, too, would have worked as a story) - I didn't expect that Sammy not only came to comfort Napoleon but had saved Illya. Yay!

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spikesgirl58 October 31 2021, 13:12:43 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad Illya wasn't dead either. :DD I'm delighted that I surprised you!

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selyndaep November 1 2021, 00:28:22 UTC
Hmmm, getting past the vision of Napoleon in a dress LOL... (Although he really does have nice legs).
Really, REALLY liked the story!

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spikesgirl58 November 1 2021, 10:54:22 UTC
Yes, well, I couldn't resist. I still blame Blake Edwards (SOB). :DD

Thanks so much for reading! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.

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akane42me November 9 2021, 22:57:08 UTC
This is filled with great visuals and emotions, Napoleon's physical and mental state really came through. I love the extra surprise at the end, with Sammy coming to Illya's aid, too!

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spikesgirl58 November 10 2021, 12:53:21 UTC
Thank you so much. I have to admit, I had to think long and hard about Napoleon's outfit. :DD

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