A Halloween Treat for Duche55

[spikesgirl58]

Title: A Haunting in the Neighborhood
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2915
Prompt:

Comments

[lindafishes8]

Holy crap! Talk about a hair-raising ending! You got me. :-O

[spikesgirl58]

Ahhh, music to my ears! Thank you so very much!! :D

[lee_the_t]

I like the episodic beginning where you give us a vivid instant of a tragedy each decade (I was a little confused about Katie's family - I didn't know who the "the girl" who couldn't get over it was - I thought Katie was the only girl, and she died). If anyone can solve a ghost mystery, it's a house full of UNCLE agents!

[spikesgirl58]

You should have tried reading it before Sparky had her way with it! Thanks for reading and what could be better than a houseful of UNCLE agents. :DD

[duche55]

Wow! This was very gripping and creepy. I’m glad I’m not alone in the house tonight! Thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading it - it was excellent! Happy Halloween!

[spikesgirl58]

Thank you so much! I did have fun!

[duche55]

I’ve just been reading the real accounts of the place. Very scary stuff!

[spikesgirl58]

It isn't someplace where I'd want to visit.

[elmey]

I like this a lot; the introductory episodes really ratcheted up the tension, and each time one of the Uncle agents went off on their own I got more nervous... a really exciting resolution too with an appropriately creepy twist!!

[spikesgirl58]

Thank you so very much. The place is real, but I have to confess having a lot of fun tweaking it for the guys!

[akane42me]

Eeeeeek! That was one creepy ghost story! Wow!
I love the history of the various evil hauntings over the years and the explanation of how the place was cursed!
Yes, definitely rent a hall!

[spikesgirl58]

It was a challenge to find a ghost story that was in the right spot at the right time - making up the history was worth the effort, though. :DD

Thanks so much for reading!