That is good, the people wearing human looking masks. The smoke ball made good suspense, too. A nice Halloween fic, and those last two lines make a good ending.
This was a tough prompt, and I didn't actually get to write the story until yesterday. I had no idea where it was going to go until I started writing it...then the cult idea materialized and I realized that was it, that's what it needed.
Toccata and Fugue in D minor is one of my favourite classical pieces (It's just so gothy, lol). It went perfectly with the creepy tale you wove. A for Napoleon's pun, all I can say is "GROAN" :-D
Thank you! I could hear the music in my head when I stared writing, and decided I had to include it with the story.
When I started out, I had no idea where the story was going. It was coming along...okay, until I gave it the cult twist and then it got really creepy, which is what I wanted. Napoleon's pun at the end was the perfect counterpoint to that creepiness.
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This was a tough prompt, and I didn't actually get to write the story until yesterday. I had no idea where it was going to go until I started writing it...then the cult idea materialized and I realized that was it, that's what it needed.
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Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
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When I started out, I had no idea where the story was going. It was coming along...okay, until I gave it the cult twist and then it got really creepy, which is what I wanted. Napoleon's pun at the end was the perfect counterpoint to that creepiness.
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