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laurose8 October 29 2017, 17:13:20 UTC
That is good, the people wearing human looking masks. The smoke ball made good suspense, too. A nice Halloween fic, and those last two lines make a good ending.

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mrua7 October 29 2017, 17:30:39 UTC
Thank you so much! You mentioned a lot of good elements in the story!

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jkkitty October 29 2017, 19:11:31 UTC
Supper is on! spooky

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mrua7 October 29 2017, 19:44:59 UTC
Thank you Pat!

This was a tough prompt, and I didn't actually get to write the story until yesterday. I had no idea where it was going to go until I started writing it...then the cult idea materialized and I realized that was it, that's what it needed.

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ssclassof56 October 29 2017, 20:24:32 UTC
Thank you for the story! I loved reading it to the musical accompaniment. The cult was a creepy twist. And your closing lines were purr-fect. :D

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mrua7 October 29 2017, 21:50:16 UTC
Thank you. I'm thrilled you liked it and the accompanying music. It was a tricky prompt!, and glad the twist worked.

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gevr October 29 2017, 21:25:53 UTC
I absolutely love Toccata and Fugue in D minor ! And the idea of a cannibalistic cult makes one shudder, doen't it ?

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mrua7 October 29 2017, 21:51:52 UTC
My job is done then. It made you shudder, and you enjoyed the story line AND the music. Who could ask for anything more?

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

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jantojones October 29 2017, 22:40:12 UTC
Toccata and Fugue in D minor is one of my favourite classical pieces (It's just so gothy, lol). It went perfectly with the creepy tale you wove. A for Napoleon's pun, all I can say is "GROAN" :-D

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mrua7 October 29 2017, 22:57:21 UTC
Thank you! I could hear the music in my head when I stared writing, and decided I had to include it with the story.

When I started out, I had no idea where the story was going. It was coming along...okay, until I gave it the cult twist and then it got really creepy, which is what I wanted. Napoleon's pun at the end was the perfect counterpoint to that creepiness.

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