ROTFL!!! Poor Sam, Dean will have no idea in the morning, won't he?
I'm glad you were able to update even with everything's that going on in your RL. This chapter was very much of exposition for the future, yet right in the middle of it you managed to break my heart with this: Something had stirred in Sam's chest, a feeling that only made him hate himself more for the disgusting feelings that were slowly invading his mind. Dean deserved something more than Sam, and more than hunting. While Sam had been the only one to ever voice a desire for 'normal', he figured it was something Dean just never thought he could have. But it didn't have to be like that and it shouldn't be like that. Dean deserved his own kids. No one could ask for a better father.
Okay. So. I like how you write Elena and Nikolai in - very nice and great addition to the story line. And Nikolai and Deen? ♥ I love coloring books =3 Sam's jealousy is making me bounce with glee!! And right at the end, you're just waiting for them to tear off their clothes and Dean passes out. LOL. But this is getting more plot twisty and I can't wait to see what's happening BECAUSE IT IS KILLING ME WOMAN. *smishes*
I printed this to read later and now I finally can come to you and say how much I LOVED this chapter! Seriously! And guess what was on TV just the other day and I watched again? ;)
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Poor Sam, Dean will have no idea in the morning, won't he?
I'm glad you were able to update even with everything's that going on in your RL. This chapter was very much of exposition for the future, yet right in the middle of it you managed to break my heart with this:
Something had stirred in Sam's chest, a feeling that only made him hate himself more for the disgusting feelings that were slowly invading his mind. Dean deserved something more than Sam, and more than hunting. While Sam had been the only one to ever voice a desire for 'normal', he figured it was something Dean just never thought he could have. But it didn't have to be like that and it shouldn't be like that. Dean deserved his own kids. No one could ask for a better father.
::HUGS::
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Okay. So. I like how you write Elena and Nikolai in - very nice and great addition to the story line. And Nikolai and Deen? ♥ I love coloring books =3 Sam's jealousy is making me bounce with glee!! And right at the end, you're just waiting for them to tear off their clothes and Dean passes out. LOL. But this is getting more plot twisty and I can't wait to see what's happening BECAUSE IT IS KILLING ME WOMAN. *smishes*
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Seriously!
And guess what was on TV just the other day and I watched again? ;)
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And was it...The Mothman Prophesies? ;-D
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