past!Dean/future!Castiel, rimming + sort of biting, NC17 1/2janie_tangerineApril 20 2010, 13:07:38 UTC
If only you didn’t know better, you’d think that this is happening just in your head. It’s not like you haven’t fantasized about something like this for years, now.
(Most times, you were high.)
But you know better. Because not even in your most hopeful fantasies you thought it would go like this.
In those fantasies, Dean would come into your cabin, send everyone out, tell you that he was sorry and you’d say that well, late is better than never (you could never not forgive him something), and then you’d kiss and he’d make love to you as he used to before Detroit and he’d stay after. You wouldn’t do much; hell, in comparison to your weekly orgies with girl whose name you don’t even remember, your fantasies concerning Dean are so vanilla that he would probably make fun of you, if he knew.
Point is, it happened, but it didn’t go like this.
Just to say the main difference, it’s the Dean that came from before, not the fearless leader whom you don’t recognize anymore
( ... )
Re: past!Dean/future!Castiel, rimming + sort of biting, NC17 2/2janie_tangerineApril 20 2010, 13:08:18 UTC
“Dean,” you whisper, wrecked and sounding almost desperate; you don’t even know what you’re asking for, and you think you’re this close to coming just from this, but he seems to get whatever it is that you can’t say and he stops. But his hands now run up slowly and gently over your sides and you shiver as he runs his tongue along the rim again before raising his head for good. He turns you over, then, and kisses you like before another time. Still gentle and slow, and it undoes you almost as much as the rest.
You don’t expect the bite that follows next when his head move and his teeth lightly grasp the skin on your shoulder, because after all it’s fair that he’d leave a mark. You did it on him years ago, hadn’t you? Even if now the Dean that has lived through this doesn’t seem to remember anymore
( ... )
Re: past!Dean/future!Castiel, rimming + sort of biting, NC17 2/2mf_luder_xfApril 20 2010, 16:42:09 UTC
Oh, wow. Set in my favorite time/'verse, richly detailed, and somehow, you made rimming not only sexy but kind of beautiful, too. The 2nd person POV really worked here, too! I love getting into future!Cas' head and the POV really complimented that. This was...yeah. Wonderful. This made me happy to wake up this morning. :D
Re: past!Dean/future!Castiel, rimming + sort of biting, NC17 2/2janie_tangerineApril 20 2010, 17:03:18 UTC
Well, I'll admit that your header (which btw is AWESOME) played a part in deciding where to set it. *cough* *winks* But I have a weakness for that episode too so I was totally indulging myself, kinda. ;) I'm so glad you liked it, thank you so much!! :D
Re: past!Dean/future!Castiel, rimming + sort of biting, NC17 2/2janie_tangerineApril 20 2010, 22:36:13 UTC
Ah, f!Cas generally makes me sad as a rule so I always try to give him some half-decent time, so you can totally be both. ;) And that said, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, especially because I've written rimming ONCE before this and it was always for the same meme, lol. And ha, I <33 2nd person POV but here I thought it'd work better, so. Thanks again!!
Re: past!Dean/future!Castiel, rimming + sort of biting, NC17 2/2invisibleloveApril 20 2010, 22:23:44 UTC
;_____________; omg future!Cas always breaks my heart.
And then he kissed you as you had always hoped he would again, gentle and soft and like it mattered, and then he laid you down on your stomach, and told you to just trust him for five minutes. And you did, as you always have, because after all you can’t walk away from him.
(Most times, you were high.)
But you know better. Because not even in your most hopeful fantasies you thought it would go like this.
In those fantasies, Dean would come into your cabin, send everyone out, tell you that he was sorry and you’d say that well, late is better than never (you could never not forgive him something), and then you’d kiss and he’d make love to you as he used to before Detroit and he’d stay after. You wouldn’t do much; hell, in comparison to your weekly orgies with girl whose name you don’t even remember, your fantasies concerning Dean are so vanilla that he would probably make fun of you, if he knew.
Point is, it happened, but it didn’t go like this.
Just to say the main difference, it’s the Dean that came from before, not the fearless leader whom you don’t recognize anymore ( ... )
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You don’t expect the bite that follows next when his head move and his teeth lightly grasp the skin on your shoulder, because after all it’s fair that he’d leave a mark. You did it on him years ago, hadn’t you? Even if now the Dean that has lived through this doesn’t seem to remember anymore ( ... )
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And then he kissed you as you had always hoped he would again, gentle and soft and like it mattered, and then he laid you down on your stomach, and told you to just trust him for five minutes. And you did, as you always have, because after all you can’t walk away from him.
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