what immortalizes us

Oct 06, 2009 17:02

Title: My Adamant Briton (see explanation below)
Pairing: Dieter Hellstrom/Archie Hicox
Rating: strict R, I guess
Summary: There is a special rung in hell reserved for the proud. And Archie is proud.
bdsm, language kink, creepy!sadistic!Hellstrom
Warning: violence, mind games
Length: 3348
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fic, major hell storm, you basterds!, lt. cheshire cat

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napalmiris October 6 2009, 16:17:03 UTC
GoDAMN. There are so many things about this that just completely floored me. You write Hellstrom so well, I could just hear him talking. And the way you describe Archie, and just . . . GUH.

I freaking adore this part:

Dieter laughs silently, taking the risk of choking on the smoke. That's what his real laugh is like - very quiet, almost like a gentle cough, so much different from the gleeful laughter he uses to embarrass ladies in public.

So beautiful and totally perfect.

I also love everything Hellstrom says about Bridget; reminds me of the bit in the screenplay that was cut out, but even MORE wicked :D

I beg you to write more Hellstrom fic ♥

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mezzafredda October 6 2009, 17:01:41 UTC
OMG YOUR ICON *dies laughing*

Well, thank you so much <3 Your review has just made me a lot happier. It's sort of awkward to admit how very inspiring I find Hellstrom's character. D:

Yay hahah sorry Bridget. She's charming, actually, but I couldn't help it.

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napalmiris October 10 2009, 10:03:48 UTC
XD Fassbender is such a dweeb - I bet he didn't even realize how he looked doing that lmao

And you'r every welcome :D Don't feel awkward about finding Hellstrom inspiring - the little bastard inspires me (and a lot of other people) as well ;)

I feel so bad for Bridget sometimes, because none of the characters seem to like her lmao. Poor woman XD

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mezzafredda October 10 2009, 13:49:35 UTC
But he's too adorable for words xD That was one kodak moment xD Fassy being a mean German

Oh, but I'm of jewish origin.. (see the huge Jew nose on the icon?x) and born in Russia.. so it *is* a bit awkward! xD

Yeah.. poor Bridget xD Sometimes I want to ship her with Archie - just in spite :D (Besides, they're a lovely couple)

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zoi_no_miko October 6 2009, 16:36:45 UTC
This is bloody amazing, I love it. I love the cold callousness depicted somehow so passionately. And Landa being "definitely a poof". XD Very nicely done.

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mezzafredda October 6 2009, 17:12:43 UTC
Thank you! :D I guess Landa is just too nice and sweet... suspicion is inevitable x]

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analogized October 6 2009, 17:08:42 UTC
Oh, well done! *claps* Much love for this.

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mezzafredda October 6 2009, 17:13:00 UTC
Thanks :*

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maribarbola October 6 2009, 20:14:59 UTC
I absolutely loved this.(I'm totally saving it to print and read anytime I want to).

My favourite thing has to be how you've thrown hints at other pairings (particulary Stiglitz/Hellstrom, a particular favourite of mine), but the fanfic in general is just, GUH (Yep, I had no proper words to explain my feelings.), the characterisation is flawless, the prose is excellent, and I fucking loved the ending.

Brb being marvelled again.

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mezzafredda October 7 2009, 06:51:34 UTC
Oh, wow! Thank you so much!

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slimradio October 6 2009, 21:14:56 UTC
This was fantastic. As others mentioned, the hints at other pairings were great and the language kink and the military ranks and guuuuh. And Landa and Hellstrom at the end was the icing on the cake. There isn't enough Hellstrom fic out there, so thanks for that as well. :D

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mezzafredda October 7 2009, 06:54:29 UTC
Thank you! :* I guess it's the movie itself that suggests so many pairings, I wish I could hint at them all :D

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