KHR: counting down the hours

[mewling]

> title: counting down the hours
        > mewling

> { katekyou hitman reborn, PG, gokudera/tsuna, BL}
        > { Five moments, is all it takes.}

one

Five moments, is all it takes.

two

Gokudera watches, as

three

what took so many years to build

four

takes only five moments,

Comments

[suntea]

... Future fics are always so depressing...

I really, really like the way you wrote this though. *_* This is going to go in my memories~

[mewling]

>o< Thank-you! I guess future fics don't have to be depressing, it's just more fun this way. But that's an idea, hmm...

[scarlet_pencil]

Wow. Just wow, this is very emotive. The sparcity of the words really makes teh piece, and yet you can really feel the emotion underneath. I like it a lot.

Although, in the last line, I think it should be "breathe" instead of "breath." But the only thing I noticed. Great fic, I loved it! ^_^

[mewling]

Ahhh! *blush* thank you for pointing that out. That'll teach me to push out five fics in one day.

Ah, and happy new years!

[scarlet_pencil]

No problem, glad to be of service. ^_^ And, five fics in one day? And they're all as good as this? THAT'S IT, YOU ARE MY FANICTION WRITING IDOL. XD *took me an entire year to eek out five fics* XD

Happy New Year to you as well! ^_^

[mewling]

Well, they're short and I probably won't write for a year now XD. I thought it would be a cool thing to do for new year, make a bunch of fics and icons for the new year. So tired!

[s1nfulxs0ul]

I really like this one. You got the story across for such a short read. It's sad, but so worth reading.

[mewling]

Ah, thank-you! Feliz año nuevo!

[ex_hayato987]

I really liked the slow, surreal speed to this fic. The pauses gave it an almost misty, clouded feel- like notes written on wet paper. A foggy memory. But, I have two little nitpicks:
-he are across the room and the object is snatched from Tsuna’s hands.
Should be 'he is across the room', and
- ...and he certainly don’t lean over to kiss him.
Should be 'Doesn't lean over to kiss him'
I-I'm sorry, so sorry. I'm such a grammar nazi. But, I really love this fic j 3j

[mewling]

Ahhh, not more! *covers face* I keep accidentally writing in second person, then noticing much later and going back to fix it; insufficiently, as it turns out. Thank-you so much for pointing these out, I'm such a spaz.

And, uh, I'm glad you liked it ^_^; Bonne Année?

[superclever1]

I adore this. Adore. ♥
He is no virtuoso, but he plays like he means it, like it’s the most amazing and important thing in the world, music.
LOVE.
& then THAT line came.
But­- he is no virtuoso, and all he can do is play like he means it.
DOUBLETRIPLEQUADRUPLE LOVE.

& THEN ALARM CLOCK LOVE!♥

[mewling]

XD Thank-you! Akemashite Omedetô Gozaimasu!