fourteen [fic] [KHR]

[mewling]

> fourteen> mewling

Comments

[xhiro_xhiro]

wow... that was... intense. I'm not even sure what to say right now... but that was amazing. The simplicity of it, the constant change of scenes and everything was just... really well done. This was.. is... impressive.

[mewling]

Yeah... rape scenes are like that, I guess.

Um. Thank-you so much.

[rubysp720]

holy....*gape

I'm reeling from the intensity of it. *shiver..I admit I'm a die hard fan of 6927. I can see this is one very realistic and darker approach to their relationship.

Would you do one from Mukuro's pov? I'd love to see what he's thinking.

(I may be tempted to draw fanart for this...pretty please? though I make no promises cos I have projects due soon... >_<)

[mewling]

It probably doesn't show form this, but I actually like mukutsuna, so I am tempted, but urrrrrrgh..... Mukuro's hard to write.

But I'm glad you liked it!

[oscitancy]

that was amazing. o.o the intensity of it and the way you wrote it was amazing. as a reader you could literally feel what tsuna was going through. just wow. XD

[mewling]

Thank-you!

[mishmel]

NYARGH, this was so AWESOME. It was really intense and it made me feel so bad for Tsuna. And I loved the repetition of Tsuna only being fourteen. <333

Write more? =DDD

[mewling]

Thank-you!

Ahh, maybe later. Like, June.

[cleartempest]

Wow, that was INTENSE. And the format of it, with the skipping around and different characters (all just seemed so IC) and how the rape just hangs over like stigma till the very end... what doujin inspired you? XD

[mewling]

Papii by Pepushi. I think it was scanlated by ka_yakusoku... and I probably downloaded it from pineappletuna somewhere...