i’ve lost my key [fic] [xxxHOLIC]

[mewling]

> i’ve lost my key
> mewling

> { xxxHOLIC, M15+, 104, BL}
> { [future fic, AU-ish, established relationship] Watanuki doesn’t forget just his distant past. Slowly, he forgets it all. }
> { Ugh. I think that even if one eye had good vision, it’d still make it hard to see. I imagine.}

Comments

[twisted_oddity]

TT_____________TT That was SO BEAUTIFUL. Brought tears to my eyes, actually. I think it's fascinating the way Watanuki is losing his memories; I'm so glad you wrote about it. Everything was perfect, the emotion was very raw and powerful. And what an end. Keep up the amazing work.

[mewling]

(*^^)/。Th-thank you so much ~

[lokiloo]

Oh god. ;____;

I actually read this this morning, but had to run off to school. All I can say is GUUUUUUH POOR DOUMEKI, POOR, POOR WATANUKI.*bawls*

But really, this fic....It honestly made my heart lurch and hurt. The emotion you captured, it was just so raw and real and it just made me want to cry even more because there was nothing he could do....

You have my undieing love for this piece. I hope-hope-hope-HOPE you write more soon. <3

[mewling]

･:*:･(*/////∇/////*)･:*:･ Thank-you! I'm glad you liked it ♥

[skeleton_rust]

Gosh, this fic is so sad. Reminds me a lot about Clive Wearing. He has no short-term memory. http://youtube.com/watch?v=Vwigmktix2Y

[mewling]

（◎_◎）*watches* Th-that would be a difficult way to live.

[sapphirestar_]

ldkjfsl. ;____;

this is so sad, okay. so fucking sad. there's a sort of ... dunno, a detached feel to this, and just. god. and how watanuki makes tuiles d’amande again and again and god, that bit in the end ...

“Yes,” you smile at the back of your hands. “But that was a long time ago.”

... just. seriously. he smiles. the thought breaks my heart a bit. D: but it's all so so so prettily written, and it's all so very pretty, and lfkd. gorgeous. ♥

[mewling]

(^.^) Wow. Thank-you!

(side note: tuiles d’amande=delicious)

[iambickilometer]

Thing is, I was craving a good heartbreaker. And this...this was it. Broke my heart. Even worse than death, even worse than anything, is this prospect of simply nullifying what was. And Doumeki being there, trying to hang on but unable to stop the inevitable... that really clinched it.

And your way of breaking it up... the large spaces, the small font, the pale colour. The short paragraphs. The second person POV. It added to the feelings of helplessness and loss that pervaded this story.

I very nearly cried.

Thank you for writing this.

[mewling]

*beams* So glad you liked it. I may write more holic once the manga gets interesting again. Yes, I am banking on that being in the distant future. (-_-;)