Comments | mewiet: Write All Night (Spoiler_Song New Year Fic): One And Only

mewiet

Write All Night (Spoiler_Song New Year Fic): One And Only

Dec 31, 2010 15:08

( “I know you’re waiting for a friend, Miss, but in the meantime, would you be opposed to sharing one dance with an old man?” )

Comments 3

cinderbella333 January 1 2011, 05:56:26 UTC

Oooh! I approve of your mission to have River meet all versions of the Doctor. I really liked the way you had them interacting here. It could have easily come across poorly because she's so young and he's so physically old (though ironically sooooo much younger than he is on the show now), but you handled it just right. So it came off as intriguing, promising, enchanting even. I really like their conversation while dancing. Showed a bit of River's spunk and demand for respect. And the Doctor's being impressed by that and appreciating her direction.

firefly124 January 1 2011, 20:31:32 UTC

Ooh, I liked that quite a lot!

alt_universe_me January 3 2011, 06:06:43 UTC

Ooh, I love the idea of River meeting One! This was great!