Comments | meunda: Property of Sanji 1

meunda

Property of Sanji 1

Jul 22, 2012 17:03

He stands tall and powerful on the battlefield, Wado vibrates with power in his hand and her sisters respond in kind with a hum of energy. He will be the greatest and this is just another step on the road to that goal. He moves gracefully from one sword stance to another, smooth with the hours and year of his life spent practicing. He pulls his ( Read more... )

sanji, zosan, au, fanfic, zoro

Comments 7

uftaki July 22 2012, 18:23:06 UTC

Ooooh, wow! This is all sounding very interesting so far! Looking forward to seeing where this will go! :3

meunda July 23 2012, 21:22:52 UTC

hee, thank you very much

makai_thief July 23 2012, 21:20:39 UTC

You got me totally looking forward to how is this story going to develop!!! Thank you for starting another unpredictable seriesXDD

meunda July 23 2012, 21:22:40 UTC

ah you're welcome. I got bit by a plot bunny so I had to let it grow. I'm interested to see whether you guys guess what I'm doing as I go along, you are all usually pretty savvy with figuring out my plans!

narcisisticniny July 24 2012, 07:17:33 UTC

Wow, this story is so interesting. Seriously, this story has already got me hooked, and it's just the first chapter! I cannot wait to see where you will go with future chapters. Really nice work with this, you handled Zoro's thoughts and feeling well throughout the story. I feel so bad for him though.

For some reason, when you first introduced the collar I thought of Battle Royale. XD Anyways, I enjoyed reading how Robin helped him out and was so happy she gave him back his earrings, I screamed NO! when they were removed. Glad they were brought back. :D

Even though the ending of the fic was sad, because of Zoro, Sanji was still cute at the end. How do you do it?! You make me feel angry for whats happening to Zoro then get all gushy because of the way Sanji is acting all nervous.

Anyways, cannot wait for the next chapter! :D

color2theworld July 28 2012, 04:00:07 UTC

Poor Zoro! He's no slave. I wonder how Sanji'll win him over? ;)

3pride December 1 2012, 23:16:59 UTC

This story is so interesting, and even if I can't understand all phrases (I'm not very familiar with the language), this is one of english story that I like
See ya next!

This review was written for Recensioni d'Autunno @ maridichallenge.