Title: Conjugated to the Infinite Order
Author/Artist:
metonomia Recipient:
ladyyueh Characters/Pairings: Castiel, Dean Winchester
Rating: PG
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers through Season 5 finale; some language.
Notes/Prompt: "Remember in 4x7, where Castiel says he has to follow Dean’s orders? Let’s take that to the next level, Castiel becomes Dean’s right hand, and
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This felt so heavy, but in a great way!
Very intriguing!
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Weapon without a wielder! The thimble! So wonderful. Poor Cas taking up the mantle on Dean's orders, even though he is a warrior and not a leader! I love this conflict. And I adore the lines about Dean's standing orders. Cas being boss! Abomination bowing like wheat and angels showing human gratitude? Fabulous!
WHAT an awesome fic. My friend, glad I am to have introduced you to Cas because you are so clearly meant to write his fic. MFEO! There better be more where this came from.
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The line about Dean wanted to bury himself in the hole that was Lawrence is so poignant. In a paragraph or two you set up this awful, AU vision, what would have happened if Sam had not thrown himself into Hell.
Oh, Lucifer laughing with Sam's voice. OHHHH Followed then by Cas wanting to be sorrier and feel more than he is capable of. The missing sense of Sam is strong throughout this -- he's the third character, felt, but not seen.
A brilliant statement on the dynamic between Cas and Dean and who each is, soars out of the story here: This is what Castiel has always been best at, what he was made for - to do, to follow, to fulfill. Dean told him to get an army, and he ( ... )
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Gahh, you are too nice, and I'm really glad that you like how it came out.
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I really want to squee over it at length, but it looks like rthstewart beat me to it. XD
I agree, I was really caught by the image of the map with the little things that symbolized the more vast concepts of a war.
Oh, god. Reading Rainbow. *wibbles* ;_;
Awesome, bamf!Cas and Dean being worn down with grief and *flails*. Just, all of it.
You rock! Thanks muchly.
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Oh man, I put the Reading Rainbow in and it felt so cheesy but then I couldn't take it out because Sam! He almost certainly watched it as a kid, and Dean would sit there pretending it was super annoying, but he loved it too, secretly.
So glad that bamf!Cas worked for you; awesome, awesome prompt, thank you so much for it!
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