the wrong story

[metisket]

Oh, Mochizuki Jun, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?

For one thing, she trolled the hell out of all of us with Holy Knight. I'm...impressed, actually. o_O

This fic is Oz's reaction to ch. 60, which is to say it's a total rubbing salt into the wound kind of fic. At least it's short?

Spoilers through 60, and Pandora Hearts doesn't belong to me. I LIKE TO THINK I'M

Comments

[zumisumi]

This is so breathtakingly beautiful *.* and sad at the same time. Oz was so in character, it's painful. And his description of hell, oh God that absolutely broke my heart ;_______; I kind of understand Oz's feelings of wanting to curse the whole world and setting everything on fire.

"and Elliot isn’t that way.

Wasn’t. That way."
How can something as simple as changing the verb tense be so terrible. YOU'RE MAKING THE PAIN BECOME WORSE *cries*

And that Holy Knight reference! After reading chapter 60, I immediately decided to read all chapters with Elliot (Elliot made me a masochist) and I felt so annoyed hurt.pained.wronged at Mochizuki-sensei! I realized that she planned this all along. I mean, how can she foreshadow Elliot's fate AT THE VERY FIRST CHAPTER THAT HE APPEARED IN AND IN SUCH A GOOFY MOMENT

[metisket]

Thank you very much! ♥ I'm happy you liked it...but I'm sorry I made it worse. *hides* It--it's how I deal with fictional pain. BY MAKING IT WORSE. XD idek, that can't be healthy...

I also reread all the Elliot sections, and oh my God, as you say, Mochizuki was laughing at our future pain FROM THE VERY FIRST SCENE. ;_; Eeeevil.

Yeah, Elliot wouldn't want that, but Elliot is dead. His wants just took a backseat. I am SO SCARED about how this is going to go. Leo, please don't be like your ancestor, wah. o___o

This series, omg.