countdown - part 2

Mar 20, 2011 23:31

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surskitty March 21 2011, 07:52:16 UTC
I now have a huge grin on my face.

That is all.

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metisket March 21 2011, 17:36:43 UTC
:D :D :D

Good! I'm happy you liked it. XD

Thank you!

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rinhail March 21 2011, 09:50:17 UTC
This is very lovely. I especially liked the ending. <3

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metisket March 21 2011, 17:43:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I was worried about the ending, so that's especially nice to hear. :D

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azalee_calypso March 21 2011, 11:59:42 UTC
I was going to say the entire Twenty-Two part was my favorite for its absolute adorableness, but the end is even more really, really sweet. The last line just wraps it up so beautifully - you, just, !! You write about mafia, you sugarcoat nothing of it, you kill off kids, you make 15 year olds lose count of the funerals they've gone to this year, and the overall feeling at the end of it is warm, fuzzy feelings.
*worships, worships, worships. Nothing new. ♥*
Also, Mukuro crossdressing, yay. And the mention of Fran in that part was just precious. *laughing forever*

Btw rhetorical question time, have you read PH #59 ? ... I'm sorry to have to say, I laughed. Mochijun abusing her characters just makes me laugh. Also, Elliott/Oz is so canon.

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azalee_calypso March 21 2011, 13:19:21 UTC
and I forgot to mention

Hibari's You get to be real is such a nice callback to Yamamoto's Maybe they're not (real), makes me crave for 1880 interaction written by you like you cannot imagine. Juuuust throwing out ideas here. No pressure. *SUBTLE SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE, SUBTLE <3*

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metisket March 21 2011, 17:52:41 UTC
l-lol I LOVE FRAN. Someday I'm actually going to manage to have him IN a fic, rather than just lurking around the edges making hurtful personal comments.

Twenty-two was probably the most fun to write, so I'm glad you liked that one! Haha, Kyoko and Fuuta. <3 <3 <3

Good, I'm glad it wasn't too soul-crush. The middle section kind of was, but he got over it! ...Sort of. XD

Someday I'll write some Hibari and Yamamoto. Because now you mention it, that would be REALLY FUN, also terrifying to bystanders. *nods* your subtle subliminal message was so subtle, HOW CAN I RESIST?

Thank you so much for the comments! :D *twirls*

P.S. Pandora Hearts: I actually haven't read the new chapter yet because everyone was so WAIL ANGST DESPAIR about it that I was frightened. But you give me hope, with your talk of awful hilarity and Elliot/Oz. ...Maybe I'll read that tonight. :D

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azalee_calypso March 21 2011, 18:16:46 UTC
So much soulcrush ! You should be ashamed ! :p But then you had Kyoko kidnapped and resenting Tsuna for coming to rescue her personally and that made it all better - and I love her comment about Hibari. Hibari kind of stole the spotlight by the end, despite not being all that present, his ~*awesome*~ just bled through everything even in his absence.
Kyoko, and Fuuta, and Yama being stealthy and Gokudera being adorable and we were just discussing what's wrong with you. And teen Lambo being very, very random. I repeat, that part was so ♥

Oh yay ! ♥ Glad the idea tickles your fancy ! They would be terrifying together. I think Hibari even likes him a little.

PH: NO ! No, don't draw hope from my loling at Mochijun. It's, ah. I'm ashamed that it makes me laugh because it really is even more WAIL ANGST DESPAIR than the previous chapters ALL COMBINED. I'm probably the only one laughing and most certainly a sick person for it. :'D it's just, god she really does hate elly. o____o

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gashinenai March 21 2011, 12:38:08 UTC
I really loved this <333

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metisket March 21 2011, 17:53:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :D

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askerian March 21 2011, 12:41:32 UTC
“He’ll always be there to be killed later,” Tsuna insists,
Oh tsuna, you changed so much. XD;;;

Tsuna and Gokudera have recently changed leads when it comes to ruthlessness. They both know it, but Tsuna tries not to rub it in. (He vowed to stop using hyper mode as soon as he noticed. Predictably, that resolution didn’t last a week.)
D: oh god Tsuna. D: D: D:

Loving Mukuro (yay!he's free!) and the way he's all confused and unbalanced by Tsuna now. Mm.

“Sawada Tsunayoshi. You broke me out of the highest security prison in the world so that I could cross-dress for you?”
*dies a little bit*

Yay for laughing!Mukuro. ;____; ♥ And the mission with Chrome after that is ... weirdly adorable oh god my view is getting as skewed as Tsuna's. D:

Ohh, Kyoko is all grown up. I love that poise. I love the idea that at some point she did train against Hibari. Ngh. I want a fic about that now.

Today he’s stopped everyone who’s spent time living in Italy and asked them what they know about taxes. They’re strangely expert. In fact, if he’s learned ( ... )

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metisket March 21 2011, 18:31:09 UTC
It is the eternal question of Tsuna: are we proud of him, or are we REALLY SAD for him? ??? I never can decide.

Confusing Mukuro should really be everyone's favorite pastime. It would be mine. XD

Kyoko! Man, so much potential for awesome. And I like to think that Tsuna had Hibari and Bianchi train all the ladies, on the theory that they wouldn't hold back with them, unlike everybody else. But they would have to do this under a very strict, Ryouhei-specific code of omerta. XD

lol, Italy. "Do you want to pay for that in cash? Are you SURE you don't want to pay in cash? I'll give you a discount if you'll pay in cash!" XD XD XD

That whole section with Fuuta and the ranking book was SO MUCH FUN to write. :D And Yamamoto has doubtless gotten an unimaginable amount of crap about his personal life from such people as, oh, Squalo. Random "what's wrong with you?" comments probably hardly even register at this point. :D

Hibari <3. He's such a lovable sociopath, I don't know. TYL!Hibari always charmed me with the way he was obviously fond of ( ... )

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