countdown - part 1
The funny thing about this one is that I actually outlined it, which never happens. Never in life. And yet I worry that the structure only makes sense inside my crazy head.
…It should be a decent read regardless. *crosses fingers*
So! This is a series of vignettes about Tsuna, his guardians, and the people closest to him-snapshots of the impact they ( Read more... )
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And Yamamoto ! Yamamoto. Holy crap I love every line of dialogue in that scene 8DDDD
And holy crap, how do you make any cameo of any given character a powerful statement about their... well, character ? Chrome, Iemitsu, Enma at the grave, just ffffff.
Also I cannot help but mention that in Spiral : the Bonds of Reasoning, people do try to kill each other with kitty dolls bombs. Not Hello Kitty, but close enough. And in the anime, also a bunny plushie.
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...I can see I'm going to have to finally break down and read Spiral now. XD
YAMAMOTO IS CREEPY, but omg I love that guy. I'm really glad you liked that part! I tinkered with it...um, forever...? ^_^
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This is such a gorgeous OUCH, for how simple the sentence is. ♥
In hyper mode, Tsuna loses all doubt.
The advantages to this are the same as the disadvantages, which is a problem most people can’t see.
... ngh. X3
He can already feel the horror, though it doesn’t quite belong to him yet. He’s waiting for it; it’s waiting for him.
Oh Tsuna. *hugglesquishes* I love how you handle the dying will mode.
The scariest thing is that the gap between dying will Tsuna and everyday Tsuna is getting narrower all the time. People say it’s good to be sure of yourself, but they don’t mean sure the way dying will means sure. Society imposes restrictions for a reason. There are reasons people don’t normally live like they have nothing to lose.
This paragraph is also gorgeous. *_*
The part with Chrome = so sad. Argh. That she could still be so damaged two years later... grghgn.
“I don’t understand them,” Tsuna murmurs, disturbed. “They don’t even seem ( ... )
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Oh, the more we learn about Giotto, the more that guy bugs me. THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING, GIOTTO? D:
I'm happy you liked the dying will part! It is kind of a creepy concept, as described, and Tsuna's always so reluctant to use it... o_O
Poor Chrome. ;_; This has been a GODAWFUL arc for her, it makes me cringe just thinking about it.
Seriously, Haru would handle being boss with much less angst than Tsuna. But no, he's NEVER GOING TO ESCAPE. poor baby.
lol, Yamamoto: always keeping things in perspective. :D
Yeah, that Iemitsu and Enma section even depressed the hell out of me. *passes around existential angst, also popcorn* XD
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Gokudera has been spending too much time with Yamamoto, clearly, because he’s got his arms wrapped around Tsuna and is dragging him bodily away from the punching bag. There was a time, Tsuna thinks wistfully, when Gokudera wouldn’t have dared touch his boss so casually. Whatever happened to that?
I love how you describe the relationship between these two. Ahh that line made me laugh through my tears. Gokudera is such a sweetie, and oh Tsuna! And They’re always out of synch, but Tsuna thinks that’s why they get along so well now. Each in a position to understand the other.. Just wonderful.
*rushes off to read part 2*
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I have such hopes for Gokudera and Tsuna and their relationship as time goes by. All it would take would be for Tsuna to be a little less scared and Gokudera to be a little less RESPECT THE HIERARCHY, and they could be the most awesome BFFs ever. And that could happen! I even think it probably will. :D
*glee*
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And I'm happy you enjoyed my Gokudera. I firmly believe that the more he grows up and calms down, the more awesome he will be. <3
Anthrax Care Bears really seemed like the kind of thing that would appeal to Chrome. XD
Thank you so much for the comment!
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