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metisket

the lord's duty

Dec 21, 2010 22:15

Pandora Hearts fic. Ffff at this point it probably counts as a Pandora Hearts problem. XD

This one is about Leo and Elliot. On the cute/messed-up scale, they are slightly nearer the cute end than Gil and Oz. Bless. Although I’m still unclear on where exactly Leo stands with regard to this whole Humpty Dumpty thing, and so they may be a lot more ( Read more... )

pandora hearts

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zetyr December 22 2010, 06:27:02 UTC

I'll read and comment on this (with likely squealing) in a minute, but first: There's no cut, darling. =)

metisket December 22 2010, 06:31:49 UTC

*fixed*

Also *shamed* XD Thanks!

gommyommy December 22 2010, 07:11:04 UTC

That was great. Clever scenario. Lots to love. My favorite bit was this:

"Elliot, who was marching toward him (he always marched everywhere; he never did anything so mundane as walking). He snatched Gilbert’s hat off his head in passing for mysterious Elliot reasons. He made it to Leo’s side, all arrogant confidence, untold generations of Nightray pride behind him-and then he stopped and fidgeted with the hat in sudden, ill-concealed panic."

Elliot and Leo are fun to write aren't they? :)

metisket December 22 2010, 07:29:32 UTC

:D I'm glad you liked it!

God, they really are fun to write. Perfect understanding on the one hand, years of pointless arguments on the other. BEST THING EVER. And Elliot, bless his heart, is unintentionally hilarious about 90% of the time. *loves*

Thank you so much for the comment! XD

azalee_calypso December 22 2010, 19:52:34 UTC

^
I second that paragraph quoting. DAT HAT. It was simply adorable. ♥

azalee_calypso December 22 2010, 11:21:13 UTC

Not reading it yet because I haven't read chapter 56 yet - where where did you find it ? Every month I see spoilers popping up everywhere like a week before it finally comes out on mangareader, everyone isn't reading it in Japanese are they ?? DD:

metisket December 22 2010, 16:36:30 UTC

Ehm...I read it in Japanese. *hides* Usually I wait for the scanlations out of laziness, but this time I was impatient. IT'S AN AWESOME CHAPTER!

They are pretty vague spoilers. This is so speculative anyway, I'm not sure you'd be able to tell what was a spoiler and what was just my wishful thinking. On the other hand, surely the scanlations will be out soon! :D

azalee_calypso December 22 2010, 19:00:23 UTC

Gyaaaaaaaargh !! This means the scanlators take an entire week ?? DD: ... well, they are pretty long chapters. TRC was scanlated like 24 hours after the raws came out but a chapter was what, 17 pages long.
I'VE BEEN SPOILED ABOUT ONE THING FOR THAT CHAPTER AND I AM EXCITED ♥ But yes I'll just be waiting for the scanlations. :'D According to my calculations it might be out for Christmas. ♥

orchida December 22 2010, 17:09:56 UTC

You managed to capture exactly what I love about these two. ♥ They're just so dorktacular with their arguments and (Elliot especially) snappishness, and then when you couple in the overwhelming fact that they care so much about each other and are so goddamn dependant on the other. Well, I kind of adore them. :D

Much love for this fic, and even though we don't quite know everything yet about what's going on, I think it would be mighty plausible for the characters to act exactly how you've said it. Much love indeed. Also your Oz is just lovely. ♥

metisket December 23 2010, 04:55:24 UTC

XD Aren't they so dysfunctionally cute? *loves* This series has a ton of adorable relationships, but Elliot and Leo manage to stand out.

I'm glad you liked it! Really interested to see how the next few chapters go, God. *bites nails* Oz. ♥ THAT KID.

Thank you so much for the comment! :D

azalee_calypso December 22 2010, 19:51:13 UTC

(When I randomly checked again after my last comment, it was out.)

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

I was not expecting this plot
LEO TRIAL
I'm trying to decide who stole the show here between Alice (“Hey, we broke the chandelier in here one time.”), Sharon ("On your knees, please" omfg *nosebleed*), Break (everything about him just everything.), Oz, Elliot or Leoleoleo but they all did, they all did
fffffff
so much arguing love ♥
Oz being proud and saying Leo and Gil have got the master-servant relationship thing backwards fffffffffffffffff
You have just saved my day and made it awesome again ♥♥

metisket December 23 2010, 05:05:17 UTC

YAY!

So glad you liked all the characters! Haha, Alice. <3 AND SHARON. It's just too bad Sharon was born in a time before bondage gear was a Done Thing. XD I love her and Break together, they're such a menace.

It just about killed me in canon when Oz said he was jealous of Elliot and Leo's relationship. OZ. ;_; But yeah, I like to think he's Leo/Elliot Fanboy #1.

I'm glad to improve your day! ♥♥♥ Thank you so much for the comments! :D