maintaining perspective

[metisket]

Break fic for azalee_calypso ! :D

I'm betting that Break spends a lot of time babbling to himself inside his own head. He seems like that kind of guy. But it is starting to annoy me that people canonically die on him all the time. What's that about? What, he's not tormented enough? Shall we stick needles in his one remaining eye, too? WHYYYYYY? This is like

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[mikimayu]

man(woman i guess?),this is awfully great!!!this even more than harry potter or twilight i think!!!too charming!!the writer is brilliant, excellent ..all degree of talented and gifted should be given to you!!

man, i really thought it was Break for real!Oz,Sharon and all were just like they used to...men, you should make a novel out of it!!!i will be the first one to buy it...

Anyway...BRAVO!!

[metisket]

XD High praise indeed. Thank you so much! I'm especially glad you liked the characterization--I fiddled with Break's voice for a while, so. Whew! :D

Thank you again! ^_^

[lil_blossom]

Since I kept seeing Pandora Hearts popping up in your journal I finally went and read the whole damn thing (which I shouldn't be doing at this time of the school year? Oh well).

It was ♥ and kind of reminded me of DGM and Kuroshitsuji put together. Only the unearthly otherworldly creature he's acquired used to be human and is hilarious with meat instead of planning to devour his soul with Ciel. And the other person in his head probably had good intentions while the 14th in Allen's head is ... yeah. He does have that clock ticking on his chest though. Why does it feel like all my boys have a death clock over their heads>

But lets see, your fic. Oh Break. I loved him. And him with Oz and Sharon ♥ ♥ ♥ I love everyone in that series and you wrote them so awesomely well. I love how Sharon doesn't have to be a strong person physically to be so strong in a way all on her own. And the way Oz shows his concern over Break.

I love your Break voice.

You make me happy.

[metisket]

:D :D :D MY EVIL PLAN IS WORKING.

...Sorry about the school year timing, though. *cringes*

It really IS like DGM meets Kuroshitsuji; I even told someone else that as an attempted pitch (which...didn't work. BUT I TRIED.) XD But yes, so many lovable characters, all weirdly out of touch with time. I don't know what the deeper meaning is meant to be there, but it makes me happy anyway!

So glad you liked my Break! It's weird...he has such a distinctive voice, and yet sometimes it's oddly hard to copy. What's that about? Just further to the general perversity of Break? o_O

Sharon is awesome. And in so many weird, unexpected ways. She's always saying, "I can handle this. I CAN TOTALLY HANDLE THIS," and you don't believe her and Break doesn't believe her, but then, hey, it turns out she can handle it. She's starting to look like she can handle absolutely anything. ♥♥♥

ANYWAY. Thank you so much! Your comments always make me happy. :D

[ravelqueen]

ohhh break....I... don't even know what to say, cause this is perfect

its exactly how break is, always hiding and it explains things like his relationship with oz so well! I mean they are so similar, even though I dare say Oz is a bit crazier, probably cause his insanity isn't as refined as Breaks

But only he would think of giving the other actual pertinent information about stuff as making them rely on him and thus making it harder when he dies....that makes absolute sense while it makes no sense at all

and him kind of being suprised that these kids have grown on him so much makes my chest hurt, I just want to hug them all and put them in a nice place with flowers....possibly an asylum, but a nice one! XD

and ohh oz worrying about him and break kind of worrying about oz and everyone just being a bit broken and reim being dead ;_;

but the one who was so amazingly portrayed wasn't only Break! SHARON!!! How are you so awesome?!!

best sentence for her: They would never say, “I love you,” when they might instead say, “You’ll never

[metisket]

:D :D :D Thank you so much! Break was tricky to write...but a lot of fun, too. Mocking himself as much as other people. Equal opportunity, that's Break.

Oz will get there, I believe in him! ...Assuming he lives long enough. o_O

Hah! Seriously ALL the characters could use a nice, quiet asylum with flowers. BUT NO, ALAS.

Oh, Sharon. <3 She is so quietly scary, I love her. And she's one of those people--you can tell she's just going to get more awesome with every passing year. YAY YAY YAY

[mary_anneh]

(Oh, hi ~ I'm just a random stranger from the PH community)

I don't like Break that much. Never had, but ... THIS WAS SO AWESOME AND HILAROUS DD: ADSJKJ ♥!. There are too many wonderfull phrases and thoughst I would like to quote (because they were just perfect), but I would end up quoting all the fic.

You'r writing is spectacular: dynamic and charming. The characterization was brilliant. Oh, I love when writters recognize and take advantage of the twisted side of the character's personalities. Seriously, Oz isn't a cute child at all. He's too messed up, but that's why I love him xD ♥. The same applies to the rest of the cast. However, not many writers know how to reflect that (it's an easy task neither) but you did it perfectly.

So, yeah ~ this was just perfect <3.

(And forgive my bad english, please ;;)

[metisket]

*waves* :D

Yeah, I wasn't all that sold on Break at first myself. And then he grew on me, obviously, and now he's vying for position of my favorite. Crazy turnaround. I think I started to like him when I figured out how old he was? Like, if he's in his 80s, and everyone he's ever loved has died a couple of times over...

He's pretty justified in however he chooses to cope with that. Bless.

Seriously, Oz isn't cute at all. :D THAT'S WHY HE'S FUN.

Thank you so much for the comment! I'm really happy you liked it. :D

[heterodog]

BREEEEAK BREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAK this was fantastic ♥!!!

[metisket]

:D Thank youuuuu! I'm so happy you liked it! ♥

I think I love Break a little more with every single chapter. XD