that madame christmas fic

May 04, 2009 19:33


*stares at fic*

*fic stares back*

*fic throws spitballs*

...WHATEVER, AT LEAST IT'S FINISHED.

I do not own FMA. Sigh.

family business )

fma, chaos verse

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eiliem May 5 2009, 04:07:42 UTC
You are my god.

Wow. This is amazing.

And hilarious.

And just really, brilliantly well-written.

It's funny, you've kept descriptions to the bare minimum (which actually makes it easier and clearer to read) but I can see it all in my head!

Your Ed is a joy and a delight to read, the perfect balance of wicked and sincere and Mme Christmas...
well, as Ed said "now I know where you got the awesome from"

Do you have any plans to write stuff of your own/do you write stuff of your own?

“Edward Elric,” said the son-molester. Awesome indeed.

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metisket May 5 2009, 17:17:34 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Descriptive writing is really a weakness of mine, so...this was actually cheating. *gets away with it* Yes!

Yay, you liked Madame Christmas! In canon she is clearly made of win; I was worried about doing her justice.

My own stuff...*gazes around at half-completed stuff*...I guess? One day, I have these great ambitions to actually FINISH SOMETHING.

Thank you for the comment!

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eiliem May 5 2009, 21:03:29 UTC
Mmm, I totally know what you mean, I never finish anything. ;_; Maybe I'd be further along if I tried writing short stories, but no, I want to write loooong stuff >_>

But if you ever do finish something, or get anything published - let us know!!! ^^

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rosalui May 5 2009, 05:53:39 UTC
This is, in my mind, actually one of the better Roy/Ed characterizations. They're not all... lovey-dovey, and that helps, somehow. XDD

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metisket May 5 2009, 17:24:48 UTC
Thank you!

Yes...not a lot of Arakawa characters strike me as the lovey-dovey kind. Roy, Ed - for that matter, Winry, Hawkeye, Ling, Lan Fan - no matter how you pair them, they're not going to be lovey-dovey. Can still be cute, though. :)

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kookiety May 5 2009, 06:53:44 UTC
O_O

Ooooo

WOW :D

*flops*

*gets on knees and stares at you with star-struck eyes*
You can have my future babies, my music collection, the bit of books I have, cookies, a zillion hugs, whatever you wish - *puts collar around self and hands you the leash* ... Oo that sounds kinky... Well...

My OTP... and this is how I imagine them to be and no writes like that and I love you!

With you saying the fic throwing spitballs at you I expected - okay - well - okayish and and I read it and now I want to SQUEE and I now know better.
Your fics have such a ridiculously huge amount of quotable quotes it's - it's - it makes me ecstatic.

*floats off with such a silly happy goofy grin*

Thank you! <3

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metisket May 5 2009, 17:32:24 UTC
Thank you!

What I think of my fic and what everyone else thinks of my fic...there is no relationship between the two. None at all. As a result, I just do what my beta tells me. In this case, she said, "God, post it already, it's fine. What's the matter with you?"

...*has no answer to this*

Other times I think it's fine, and she says, "...You cannot post it like that. Write it again, only this time make it not suck." She is wise. *nods*

But yay! You liked this one! *well pleased* :D

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brinylon May 5 2009, 09:58:28 UTC
Gods, I love you. You write so amazingly great, so light footed but never empty headed XD
Great work!

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metisket May 5 2009, 17:35:06 UTC
:D

Thank you so much! I'm so relieved you liked this one; I was really nervous about it. *dances*

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isiteggs May 5 2009, 11:13:24 UTC
This is brilliant. Wonderful interaction between the characters. <3

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metisket May 5 2009, 17:36:41 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :D

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