[Sups/Bats]Autumn Dream

Nov 11, 2008 19:59


Poetry again!
I think I have a thing for peoms. (who doesn't?)
This time is "Autumn Dream", by John H Bidwell. A very beautiful one.  :)
Autumn Dream
by John H Bidwell 
Wafting down so gently through a chilly autumn breeze
A yellow leaf glides softly to a landing with such ease
Upon the crystal surface of a slowly moving stream
To later be a witness to ( Read more... )

superman/batman, poem, fanart

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bradygirl_12 November 12 2008, 01:38:07 UTC
This is so lovely! The poem fits Clark and Bruce perfectly, and your illustration is so fluid and dreamy that it fits the poem! Great job! :)

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meteor_seven November 12 2008, 02:26:12 UTC
Thank you. :D
If I don't share computer with my mom, I'm gonna use this as my desktop. :3

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bradygirl_12 November 12 2008, 03:33:42 UTC
That's a great idea! It's perfect for a desktop! :)

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meteor_seven November 12 2008, 12:56:21 UTC
All right!
I'll save this for my own labtop :D

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carolandtom November 12 2008, 08:30:36 UTC
Lovely poem and art!

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meteor_seven November 12 2008, 12:56:38 UTC
Thank you :D

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eve_k November 12 2008, 15:37:59 UTC
What a wonderful page! The composition of the two bodies is beautifully balanced, the meandering white line rounds it off perfectly. The lineart flows to give you the feel of a weightlessness. I love the idea of the leaves shimmering through the white planes of the bodies, it makes everything seem even more dreamy and unreal. Together with their peaceful expressions and tender caresses it fits the whistful tone of the poem perfectly.
Great job, Jacque!

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meteor_seven November 12 2008, 22:37:00 UTC
I'm so gald you like this. :)
Thank you for your throughly comment, Eve. :D

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starsandsea November 12 2008, 19:00:56 UTC
Oh, this is lovely! :) The poem in beautiful and the picture fits it so well. I love the floaty quality it has. And Bruce and Clark's hair!! *flails*

Beautiful! Thank you for sharing it with us! :)

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meteor_seven November 12 2008, 22:38:10 UTC
Thank you, Star! :D

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jij November 13 2008, 07:50:55 UTC
Oooh, the motion of the leaf in the poem is lovely, and your art matches it beautifully!

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meteor_seven November 14 2008, 00:44:01 UTC
Thank you, Jen :D
That poem is SO beautiful, I'm glad to know my art matches. :)

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