The Vampire Diaries fic: That Which Has Been Lost

[metamorphagi]

Title: That Which Has Been Lost
Fandom(s): The Vampire Diaries
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,463
Summary: She won't let herself be defined by a boy, a boy who left her at that. And yet the memory of Tyler, of their transcendent connection, of him pressed against her, remains. She wishes it wasn't there, that she could continue hating him, but she can't

Comments

You captured it beautifully ...

[voz_76]

You captured it beautifully ... so poignant, so neurotic, so heartfelt, ... so Caroline.

Re: You captured it beautifully ...

[metamorphagi]

Thank you!

[middiegurl08]

This was written so so well, so in character. I wish we would have seen more emotion from Caroline when Tyler left. I know she was supposed to be angry with him, but they had grown closer in the weeks before he left. I can't imagine someone just disappearing from my life like that. I love how you portrayed her worry and her inner thoughts. Like I said before, very Caroline.

Thanks for sharing. :)

[metamorphagi]

Thanks very much! I wish we'd seen some more of her POV after Tyler left instead of just the occasional "Have you heard from Tyler" followed by concerned eyebrow thing. But oh well. He came back and that's all that matters!

[bambiscott]

YAY! Please keep writing more Forwood fics. We need more fic members on our team.

[metamorphagi]

I will absolutely keep writing them! THey're so adorable and complex and squeeful I would never be able to stay away. :D

[castielsouls]

This was so beautiful. I loved this. All the emotion, angst, were perfect. I can most definitely see this happening and I wished it DID happen. I love how you capture their more-than-special friendship. It was described well!

[metamorphagi]

Thank you muchly!

[ilovewaldass06]

That was beautiful. :)

[metamorphagi]

Thank you!